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for Family Secrets

by Keara

person Valentine
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait what\'s gonna happen next.I hope you have more chapters.:O)
person Dianne
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story.Can\'t wait for the rest.Please post soon. AAAA+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
person Aranel
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Aside from the fact that I\'m intrigued by the plot, you have done something rather rare in the fanfic universe--produced a story completely free of grammar or spelling errors, as far as I can see. Major bonus points to you for proofing and editing! That tells me thau reu really care about your writing and the characters themselves.

Please email me at the above address whenever you update it. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Aranel
person Moonface
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow first fanfic ive ever read for the plot is great umm well yeah
person Luceid
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAhhh! That was the meanest cliffhanger I\'ve evet read!!!! What happens next?!?!? Write soon, oh, almighty writer! I am at you r mercy!!! *explodes*

(ok, I\'m feeling weird today. Ignore me! ^^)
person massarokas
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! *screams* you can\'t do that~!!!!!! (actually, you can, it\'s your story anyways)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wait, actually, there\'s no place better than a hospital to strengthen relationship... ^_^ I love sooooo much your story!!!! it\'s on my favs, as you already know! feel free to email me!! and hurryyyyyyyyyy!!!
person deedee
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was soooooo evil!!! i cant believe you left it there!! please dont let the baby die please please please!!!
pansy bitch *growl* anyways great chapters =) and remember keara you promised!!! sordidus ars magica!! comeon chant with me please sordidis ars magica!!! please do that one too =) update soon....
wait a tic, *do* that one to?! ugh!!
person stinky
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yea!! more chapters!! Boo!! poor Draco is hurt!! I stil love this fic!! Keep it coming!!
person Takaro
schedule April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ironic, the bad bad bad stuff happens on chapter 13, the universal number of bad luck. Interesting...but other than that, MORE!
person WildfireFriendship
schedule April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That is just cruel to stop there! I hate Pansy. I really do. If only she hadn\'t touched the necklace, Draco would have been fine! Oh, please hurry with the next part. I can\'t wait to read it! I\'m really looking forward to it!