rate_review Reviews

very beautifully well written :D:D

Ok this ficlet is beyond fluffy. I loved the begginning, fantatic ideas there I thought. However, fuzzy as this fic leaves you feeling it also has a strange nack of making you feel a little bit sick. It's got a bit of a Mills and Boon feel about it but not as good. It's just way too cheesy, also we never quite make that leap between Ron and Draco having sex to Ron and Draco getting married, I mean honestly they barely know one another. Also there are a lot of ridiculous grammer and spelling errors that should have been obvious to you when you read it through.

AWWWW! that was just.....AWWWWWW!
Huggles to the mini ron and Draco!
And a Cookie for you for writing such a fluffy story.

Very good.

I like this story alot. They were sweet in last chapters..hehe..I like that.

Great story. I really enjoyed it!

That was just a joy to read. I thought Draco was gonna die for minute there! Woo! And Ron is just the sweetest thing! Kudos!

Although, now that he thought of it . . . Crabbe and Goyle were pretty strong. Draco wondered what it would be like to be sandwiched between the two of them, feeling as they touched and caressed him. His skin started to tingle again, a familiar coiling spreading through his stomach and groin.

Hm, the two of them, Draco smirked, thinking that he would like to see Crabbe on his knees, sucking at him. To feel Goyle behind him, touching him, spreading him . . . Draco

That was good. I usually don\'t read mpreg fics, but this was good. Have you read Vivica? It\'s a lot like this, even the same main pairing. Creepily similar. Well, anyway great job///_^
Thorn

Oh! This was just wonderful! The type of story that makes you chew your nails and shudder in happiness. I loved it!

I was a bit reluctant to read a Ron/Draco, as I\'m biased to Harry/Draco, but you\'ve got me sold on this one.

Just thought I\'d let you know. Reviews are always fun!