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for The Naughty Potions Master

by moonstonemystyk

person sam
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOoo! That was rather good! And I agree...spanking that naughty little potion masters behind would be wonderful!
person JW
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! So glad you gave Severus such a nice wife to come home to, and yes he should come home during the day, since this is what he has to look forward to. More stories, please!
person Ithilin Palandiriel
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes that sneer . . . mmmmmmm. *eyes glaze in wanton desire* Yumm.
Ithilin
person anon
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry, but this fic did absolutely nothing for me. you lack sexual tension and a solid story basis... not that that\'s always important, but you just don\'t build anything up here. try again, k.
person rca
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, good. I\'ll use my imagination and just assume it\'s Hermione. ^_^
person Delana
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I sure would love to be \"Mrs. Snape\" so I had the opportunity to tie that man to a bed. Thanks for writing it.
person shaolin
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know who it is!!! It\'s Elvira, Potion
Mistress of the Dark...lol...Love the way you
ended it..leaves it wide open..uh so to speak...
Great little fic!!
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'d like to spank that sexy man myself, not to mention having him tied to the bed;-) Thank You, this was a very nice bit of \"work\" to start my day with!!! Deb >^..^<
person kate
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whew! now THAT\'s my kind of story .

nicely done.