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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved A very Weasly Christmas - especially Draco\'s reaction to the Axe Murdering boyfriend book - and his talk with Moody earlier - brilliant. This is one of my favourite fics and I look forward to more.
Also, maybe I\'m just an ignorant muggle, or it could be a cultural clash but what is a prit-stick?
Also, maybe I\'m just an ignorant muggle, or it could be a cultural clash but what is a prit-stick?
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'ve just read and reread chapters 16-20 and I must say your writing and plot have kept pace. I know, it is already written, but it is a magnificent piece of work...you are truly gifted with a story writing ability. I think in the entire work so far my favorite episode is where Draco leaps over the table to save his soulmate...that touches me in an unusual way as him giving up everything for Harry...and is a wonderful event in their transition. You really are very talented! Thanks, Pete
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have rarely read a story that is (a) written this well, (b) appears so well thought out, and (c) almost yearns to be set free. The author has a talent for plot and expressive writings that can only be termed as a gift of the highest order. A Tremendous Work! Congratulations! You deserve ten stars, but I can only give you 5 or 6. Pete
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Was rereading - I like to do that with fics I\'m fond of, for some reason - and it occured to me that whilst you mention that the Golden Trio are all Animagi, y\'don\'t mention what they turn into. Will you be sharing their forms at some point?
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome!! I absolutely love it! The plot is awesome, it\'s heartwarming, serious, fluffy, sexy, and it has a comical edge to it!! Keep up the great work!! I really can\'t wait to find out what\'s going to happen next. Every time I think one thing is going to happen you pull a switch and the opposite happens! It\'s truly a wonderful story! I can\'t wait for the next five chapters to be posted!! Thank you so much for sharing this great fic with us!!
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is so good that i have to review again
as my last review was really bad
the new one
this fic is so so soo good and you don\'t know how much
i\'m looking forward to the next edition
you mead my day when i finished this part
and now i can\'t wate
i want more!
you are a great writer please keep going
as my last review was really bad
the new one
this fic is so so soo good and you don\'t know how much
i\'m looking forward to the next edition
you mead my day when i finished this part
and now i can\'t wate
i want more!
you are a great writer please keep going
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna -look- at the reviews! ;_; But I\'d review if I had read all the chapters yet. Kickarse story!
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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is so good i can\'t wate to read the next ones
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Quite possibly the cutest thing I\'ve ever -seen-. Absolutely adorable.
Tho of course Harry -would- be the person who does something Utterly Impossible. He\'s good at that. ^^
Capital story, tho you\'re a bit too fond of semicolons - nothing wrong with a parenthesis or four! But it\'s not an overly jarring error. I 't w't wait for more of this whenever you plan to give it, and I\'m grateful that this isn\'WIP.WIP. ^^
Tho of course Harry -would- be the person who does something Utterly Impossible. He\'s good at that. ^^
Capital story, tho you\'re a bit too fond of semicolons - nothing wrong with a parenthesis or four! But it\'s not an overly jarring error. I 't w't wait for more of this whenever you plan to give it, and I\'m grateful that this isn\'WIP.WIP. ^^
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous story! You\'ve actually inspired me to review; no easy task I assure you. I don\'t even review my most favorite of stories, which by the way this is one of now. Unfortunately I can\'t remember all the encouraging/insightful thoughts the first five chapters inspired--always happens, mainly why I don\'t leave reviews--maybe I should start sitting down with a note pad every time I read.
Only two irks here, the first so petty I wont even mention it, and the second isn\'t even for you or about the story, but a review (dood, semicolons and parenthesis don\'t serve the same purpose, and the latter generally aren\'t used in fiction).
Anyway, just wanted to give you two thumbs up, five stars, and the obligatory bribe of sweetened naked characters in exchange for more chapters pronto, no matter their state of unbetadness!
Oh! No! Wait! I remembered something! Two somethings! Ok, first of all, I really like the fact that you haven\'t designated one of them \'top\' and one of them \'bottom\' as many stories do. Usually those stories end up turning the \'bottom\' into a girl--mentally anyway--and not just any girl but the kind you want to smack upside the head, which is the whole reason I read slash in the first place; I just don\'t like reading about female characters.
The second thing is that I really like how their relationship so far is more mature than what you find in the majority of the Harry/Draco fics out there, and now I forget what I was going to say to elaborate on that...
Ok, so to sum it up; good fic, more please. <------not demanding, just begging, you are performing a (highly sought aftpublpublic service here after all.
Only two irks here, the first so petty I wont even mention it, and the second isn\'t even for you or about the story, but a review (dood, semicolons and parenthesis don\'t serve the same purpose, and the latter generally aren\'t used in fiction).
Anyway, just wanted to give you two thumbs up, five stars, and the obligatory bribe of sweetened naked characters in exchange for more chapters pronto, no matter their state of unbetadness!
Oh! No! Wait! I remembered something! Two somethings! Ok, first of all, I really like the fact that you haven\'t designated one of them \'top\' and one of them \'bottom\' as many stories do. Usually those stories end up turning the \'bottom\' into a girl--mentally anyway--and not just any girl but the kind you want to smack upside the head, which is the whole reason I read slash in the first place; I just don\'t like reading about female characters.
The second thing is that I really like how their relationship so far is more mature than what you find in the majority of the Harry/Draco fics out there, and now I forget what I was going to say to elaborate on that...
Ok, so to sum it up; good fic, more please. <------not demanding, just begging, you are performing a (highly sought aftpublpublic service here after all.