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This is SERIOUSLY the best fic that I\'ve ever read!! Now I could get into a fifty page letter about how much I loved the pure genius and originality of the plot but I\'ll save you the time and get right down to buisness. I know I haven\'t reviewed much but I did LOVE this fic, every Monday I would read the newly released chapter and then I\'d wait anxiously for the following Monday when the new chapter was released, it\'s sad that it\'s over! Now, I heard a rumor through the grape vine that you\'re considering a sequel. Well let me tell you, I know atleast fifty people who are going to be mighty happy if that rumor became fact!!! I truly hope you are writing one, I don\'t want to get my hopes up, just in case, but I would be one very happy H/D shipper if it were true!!! I would love for you to e-mme ame about it, alieviate my hopeful anxiety!! Thanks so much!!

Wonderful fic,
R

Great story!!! I loved every chapter.........are you planning a sequel?? It would be intersting the final battle with Voldie.........and the outcome of everything. If you do a sequel please email me i will love to read it.

Please continue to update. I have found this story very intriguing. Where did you get the info on Hecatemae an their soul mates?


Merrideth

Well, ve fve finished the story. Let me discuss briefly the last five chapters, then the story as a whole. In the last five, the author stayed true to her plot, she showed some courage I think to stick with it and not go way outside the realm of her story. In addition, she made it flow. I liked when she skipped the injuries and went straight to the healing process. I also liked how Draco ran to Harry after the Blainciincident. I also liked that Mrs. Malfoy came into the story as she did. I think however the last five could have used another graphic episode, or perhaps a little more graphic is the one sex scene in the last five. It tends to show them as human, and I think broaden the characters.
For the story, I enjoyed when she had some moments of high drama, but then allowed her characters time to be human, to play, to be funny even. I liked how they interacted, how they were funny, and how they were passionate with each other. She also stayed true to her genre, which I am sure was difficult.
Because of the rules she has set, she will be somewhat constrained in her sequel, but as gifted a writer as she is I am sure she will overcome those barriers. It is a great story, one that can be expounded on.
If it were a movie I would go see it, if a book I would buy it. Very well done!
Thanks, Pete

So, when\'s the sequel?

When reading this story, I usually skim first, then digest the plot, then over time I go back and read every word, inflection and paragraph to make sure I understand the entire story. Often times I read sections I like more than once. I find I am reading more and more of this story several times, and usually end up with a smile. That\'s a good indication that I am really enjoying the story.

I hope you will find a way in the final chapters to leave an ending so that you can write a sequel. This is a story that I can tell you\'ve enjoyed writing, and I can see so many have enjoyed reading. Pes ths there is a way for you to add on...in any event...Thank you from me for such a dynamic story. Now of course you realize you have caused me to bite all my fingernails down to nothing waiting in suspense for the ending! ;-) It is entirely your fault!! ;-) Thanks again for the story...well done! Pete

Back again to tell you: you\'re amazing! This story just gets better and better, and you wrap your reader in emotions masterfully. If you have a need for another beta reader, I am affectionately known as \"The Walking Dictionary,\" so I\'m at your service. Other than that, this story is wonderful, please post the rest quickly and keep my Draco as wonderfully clever as always.

Happy Holidays!

OMG...my heart is pounding...you left us in the lurch!! Now I have to wait a whole wto fto find out what is going to happen! I knew that lousy Lucius would be back!! How awful! Anyway...another magnificant 5 episodes...I cannot wait for the last 5, am I going to regret this? Thank you so much for the rich story! Pete

Forgive me for not reviewing sooner. I have been a fan of this story since you published the first five chapters. As soon as I see that several more have been posted I immediately must read them. You have woven a beautiful story. Too often stories which involve Harry (or another character) developing beyoormaormal magical abilities are ridiculously simplistic. You however have taken the time to organize a fantastically believable tale. I love the relationship between Harry and Draco, the protectiveness of Snape towards Draco (which is likely the basis of his continued surliness towards Harry), the acceptance of the other Gryffindors, and the subtlety of having even one of the \"good guys\" (that crazed Moody) being a prat. You truly understand the nuances of characters. There are no black and white characters in your work, all have shades of gray. That, in itself, is a truly wonderful accomplishment. I am saddened that Draco\'s attempts with the Slytherins led to his capture. However, there are five more chapters to go, so I can only hope that perhaps I am wrong, and at least one of his housemates see the error of their ways.

I sincerely hope this delightful, engaging, and riveting story is not the last we will hear from you. Hopefully you have another epic awaiting publication. Thanks again for sharing your work. It has been a pleasure reading it.

Maggie

I absolutely adore this story. I\'ve always had Draco as a guilty pleasure, and now he\'s sweet and loving and still sly enough to be a guilty pleasure. Please put up the rest of the chapters, I\'m dying to know what happens! Huge kudos to you on writing this very intricate and thought-provoking story.

Allie