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for Kept

by BeckyHoadley

person Rose
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very good. I just had to keep telling myself that the actors that play Remus and Colin are just actors and not nessecarily what they really look like. You should definately keep going on this one.
person Psychotikitten
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An interesting little fic....very dark, well-written despite the spelling mistakes...I like it :P Good job there...will there be more?
- dee
person BadWebDiver
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THat was wicked!!! I always wanted to seea Lucius Malfoy/Colin Creevey pairing, and that worked brilliantly. Keep up the good work.
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great start.. loving the story already. please continue.
person the Dark Lady
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this kind of situation very much! I really enjoyed Lucius using the boy as a tool to torture Remus mentally. It\'s cleverer way in order to harm the person like Remus...
I look forward to the sequel with more kinks! And please focus on the mental game & torture between Lucius and Remus; as you wrote about it very well. I enjoy mental torture more than pysical one. Am I twisted? I know, I know...
Please keep on and I\'ll watching you. Thanks for your job!
person Alym
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was creepy. I love it. You are going to write more? The sequel or something? Please do it.

I love this tipe of fics.

I am evil. *Smirk* bay.
person imladrys
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
colin/remus? colin/remus/lucius? hmm...I actually enjoyed reading this much, much more than I anticipated. I appreciate this new perspective and characterization of Colin instead of the usual Harry-lovin\' fanatic. Keep up the great work and hope you update soon!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh... I was hoping Remus would take Collin\'s virginity. But, I suppose Lucius wouldn\'t
like that very much. Can\'t wait to see what happens in the second part.
person aly,m
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more please.