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for Bathtime at Grimmauld Place

by Daya

person jenn
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i do adore humor in a smut fic and that moment with harry was just too good to pass up. *applauds happily* your scar comment certainly takes the cake for one of the most amusing lines yet. i\'m looking forward to the umm... completion of this piece and if hermione gets lupin involved, you won\'t hear me complaining. :)
person Titania
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Weeeee! Nothing wrong with being a bit pissed whilst writing! Tis qis quite entertaining. Nothing like a good, long and hot bath at the end of a long day! Get on with it then!

Titania.
person kate
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i\'ve always wanted to tell (invite?) severus to \"bite me....\" hope hermione doesn\'t lose the strenght of her convictions and hormones; i\'d love to hear how she kisses it all better in chapter 3!!!

i\'ve just been bragging on this story to my fanfic friends; your sense of humor \"reads\" very well!!!
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Now I want more! Please... continue the story soon!
person Halcyon
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, wonderful! What a great start for the BBC! I can\'t wait to read more!
person shemhamforash
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ummm...ookkkayyy...Was under the impression that Aragorn was too bloody moralistic for you. I take it not so for Hermione? I take it this was another excuse to procrastinate doing assignment. Very nice. Charming in fact.

I don\'t know really what else to say at the moment other than...are you hiding online? Cow.

Am anxious to see the next. Actually, was anxito nto next of \'Sex Adventure\' when I woke up. Like you said there would be. Liar. But am sated with this offering.

Thankyou.

Much love, respect and Pppp...ppuu..ppuussss...ppuuusssaaayyyy\'s

Shem xxx
person kate
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
took me a minute to figure out the LOTR/HP thing, but got a grin from it.

you have more great lines that i\'m going to try to steal (nicely, with credit given) and I can\'t wait to see snape\'s rion ion to a wet, naked and aroused head girl in his bath! update soon
person Fish
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*throws woks and wooden spoons at author in sacrifice*
YOU BLOODY GENIUS YOU!
haha! i LOVE hermione\'s thoughts! lol... very nicely done... very neat!
MORE! and VERY soon!

*has influential music session with old tin bathtub, hitting it with a large potato*

MORE SOOOON!

Ciao,
Fish
PS: can just see Sev struggling with clothes... awwww...

You\'re a diamond! -- CF
person Rilla
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Simply brilliant! I love that she was fantasizing about Aragorn. Too funny.
person shemhamforash
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahaha...*giggles* pmsl....Oh ...just oh...loved it...perfect, in every way perfect. Note that drunken state in no way whatsoever affects your abilities to be first class smart arse. Even though you seem to be projeg ong onto Hermione you own *ahem* fantasies..desires..opinions. Good mix really. And we all do it..

Am now going to hound you online to keep those violent bunnies attacking you so ficlet is finished tonight. Time of night (or is it morning there now?..damn timezones) be damned..

Much love

Shem xxx