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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I love SS/HG smut! Great imagery!
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely hilarious! You had me practically falling off my chair laughing...and yet, you managed to pull off the smut as well. Bravo!
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! This has so much - incredibly hot, very funny, and poignant - glad Hermione was able to help him get over the meeting. Love the way you portray them both, and Hermione\'s asides. Lovely
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This reader enjoyed it. Thanks.
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sure I\'ve reviewed this ... somewhere, but in the off-chance that I was in the same state you were when you wrote it, I\'ll review again.
Let me give you the constructive criticism first: Not enough smut. Close to enough, but there can always be more. I think there was one or two scenes where snogging, fondling, kissing or shagging was not involved and I\'m sure you could eradicate that if you really really tried.
Now for the constructive praise: I love it. Please write more of it. Or, if you can\'t write more of SS/HG in the bath (or in the pantry or in the bed or on his desk or out of doors...), please write more just like it.
Hope you\'re not too disappointed in my critique; I can be soooo demanding.
Let me give you the constructive criticism first: Not enough smut. Close to enough, but there can always be more. I think there was one or two scenes where snogging, fondling, kissing or shagging was not involved and I\'m sure you could eradicate that if you really really tried.
Now for the constructive praise: I love it. Please write more of it. Or, if you can\'t write more of SS/HG in the bath (or in the pantry or in the bed or on his desk or out of doors...), please write more just like it.
Hope you\'re not too disappointed in my critique; I can be soooo demanding.
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was DELIGHFUL & DELICIOUS!!! I look forward to your future stories of these 2 including A Hogwarts Christmas Sex Adventure!!! Deb >^..^<
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yummy! More yummy than the turkey that I ate earlier today! :-)
So where are you going with this now? Where is their relationship going to lead them?
I REALLY look forward to more chapters.
So where are you going with this now? Where is their relationship going to lead them?
I REALLY look forward to more chapters.