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for Secrets held

by missM

person MaddyRiddle
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wanted you to know that I\'m reading... eif Iif I didn\'t review ;)
I love the story and I would love if you update soon.
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Such a wonderful fic and I am so very glad you\'re continuing!
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am, as ever, with you for you write in such a unique manner....i love your story. Madness is a matter of perspective though.:)
person Lynda
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed following this story. I thought \"The Garden\" was truly wonderful in its powerful emotions. At first I thought I would have trouble reading it since it started out with Harmione so far in to madness. You captured it well I thought. As the story unfolded, it was far more clear what was happening and had me in tears at the end. I was so glad that I had never read it before you started the sequel. I would have been longing for more. I cant\' wait for more of this story. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us all!
person Rilla
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Sigh. I love the introspective view we get of Poppy. Anxiously waiting for more...
-Rilla
person kate
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAACKK!! you\'ve finished the last chapters haven\'t you? now i\'m back to holding my breath, worrying that this will turn out badly for the couple who\'ve suffered so much. unfortunately for me, your writing is too good for me to simply walk away from the story, so i\'ll go buy more tissues and brace myself for whatever is to come.

and good on poppy. maybe with her support, hermione can do what she knows is right to bring severus back into consciousness!
person naughtypixie
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Great start, it\'s very interesting so far.. only one point of advice, try using the maes of the people you\'re talking about a bit more, it gets a little confusing sometimes who the \"he\" and \"she\"\'s are... that\'a bout it really. other than that, Great work!
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 is quite intriguing!!! I almost have to feel sorry for George, he will not have his feelings returned. I am wondering if George\'s feelings for Hermione won\'t have some effect on the waking of Severus? Will his feelings of jelousy be something that breaks through into Severus\' mind? Can\'t wait to find out!!! Deb >^..^<
person Pearle
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought The Garden was interesting and well written, but I think I am enjoying this story even more. I like your view of Snape and the changes in Hermione. Please update soon.
person shiv5468
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I dont know why you worried about writing the sequel, it\'s still gripping and absorbing.