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for Secrets held

by missM

person MaddyRiddle
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Of course it was worthy. Great chapter. Keep writing... I love the way you do it ;)
person Steph
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Always worth the wait.. But please! More!
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The story breaks my heart and I am hoping that the next update will not take sng. ng. I am all too much aware of how RL can interfere. Update soon?
person kate
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve missed you! And after reading this chapter, I\'m back to feeling delight, fear, euphoria, frustration, happiness, and desolation.

Thank you for the happiness in the dream; I hope it leads to healing during the daylight hours but there is still so much work to be done for our couple.

I also hope it won\'t be so long before the next update but I do understand that somes tes the demands of real life and the whims of creative thought can override other peoples\' schedules (curse the luck).

Happy holidays and thanks again for the new chapter ~ brilliant.
person angelina
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the new chapter! This is a wonderfemotemotionally intense story. Lovely prose, great invention.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6........ Glad to see the update!!! I really hope that Severus will be able to combine his dreams & visions so that he can remember!!! Hermione really needs this, so does he!!! Looking forward to chapter 7!!! Deb >^..^<
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was afraid that you dropped off the face of the earth. Great to see another chapter from you!
I loved that Hermione had a sense of hope after her dream (or shared dream). That seems to be the theme of your story... hope. I SO want a happy ending for these two. Hey, is George going to show up again? Severus would be so jealous and teritorial (sp) if George showed up. Just a thought.
Thanks for writing.
Happy Holidays!
person EVegvary
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, girl, you\'ve hit your stride! Just one chapter into this so far and I\'m flooredcellcellent. Wondrous. Magickal.

(and the formatting is better...heh.)

Going back into the story now...
person ventrue66
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am still really enjoying the story. I lthe the new twist, that he doesn\'t remember what happened. I can\'t wait for the next chapter, but I understand that it takes awhile, especially this time of year.
person Kathy
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Long Chapters are a good thing! trust me!! This one could have been longer!!!
Update again soon!!!!