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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! A little har d to follow when you change so rapidly from 1. person POV over to 3. person POV, but I\'m sure you can fix it :)
Great idea - taking Harry and Draco out of their enviroment of JKR and into something completly different (and NOT the Monty Python way!!!)
Cruel choise of enviroment though! Hope to read some of those \"miracals\" :o)
Lol and good luck in writing the rest of the story!
Love
Hexia
Great idea - taking Harry and Draco out of their enviroment of JKR and into something completly different (and NOT the Monty Python way!!!)
Cruel choise of enviroment though! Hope to read some of those \"miracals\" :o)
Lol and good luck in writing the rest of the story!
Love
Hexia
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great fic!! ^^ You write wonderfully!
Loved the idea; loved Draco and loved Harry.
Hope you\'ll continue it.
Bye-bye!! ^^
Loved the idea; loved Draco and loved Harry.
Hope you\'ll continue it.
Bye-bye!! ^^
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You switch points of view very often and it\'s hard to follow. Sometimes the story is narrarated in 1st person \"I, me, mine\" and sometimes in third, \"he, she, they\". But I like the story line a lot, and hope that you will continue it.
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! This was so well written...I\'ve never read a fic that takes place during WWII yet, so this is different for me. The description was great. And it\'s good to see that you did research before writting this fic, instead of just blindly typing something half-assed. *sigh* War is so very depressing. Anyways, I love this so far, so please update soon! Tata for now!
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG!!!
I can
I can