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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well now, that was just plain awesome!
the girls kicked much butt there, and I loved readin it! great stuff, but I wonder where we\'ll go next with this story?
more soon bro!
the girls kicked much butt there, and I loved readin it! great stuff, but I wonder where we\'ll go next with this story?
more soon bro!
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 25 - YAY, GIRL POWER!!!!! The girls and Myrtle should get ALL the boys punished permanently. And don\'t forget Dumbledore...
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All that magic in the air and not a teacher in sight, no Mrs. Norris, no Filch, and so soon after the attack, such a lack of security the old man has, probably has McG up in his quarters actually....didn\'t need that picture.
I suppose I have to wait for my Avada, then again maybe not if word gets out and Harry can release himself from Maia\'s....charms, can I get a cruciatus at least? Something more than a stunning charm?
I suppose I have to wait for my Avada, then again maybe not if word gets out and Harry can release himself from Maia\'s....charms, can I get a cruciatus at least? Something more than a stunning charm?
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another cliffhanger! How dare you! Lol, I loved this chapter and looking forward to see who Hermione hooks up with. Keep going, great story ;)
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you go girls ! yes girl power, and ghost power ! does draco actually have feelings for hermione?
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not having faith had very little to do with my reaction to Chapter 24. Your history reads for itself. Remember
I have been around since the begining, before the re-draft. I even sent you an e-mail with my opinions for
the re-draft. I\'m am glad to read that you don\'t hate women, I was concerned - thought maybe you had
some mother issues. I think it is safe to guess that you appreciate any reaction positive or negative.
The chapter was action packed, the visuals worked I could follow what was going on (I think it is harder to
write action sequences [especially multi-character] than say lemon/smut - just my opinion). I\'m relieved
you let Hermione defend herself with and without her wand. Draco is just creepy - are we going to get any
POV from him? He started the entire confrontation...the rescue part didn\'t really make sense for me. Or
should I just take it for granted that he is an arogant Pureblood and that is simply is it.
Happy ending? I sure hope so, I\'m thinking now that this long journey may just end wherein your
Hermione comes away with ... subjugating herself to NO MAN.
25 chapters (plus the ones that are gone) it has been an interesting piece about a girl/woman from a man\'s
perspective. Until next update, thanks.
I have been around since the begining, before the re-draft. I even sent you an e-mail with my opinions for
the re-draft. I\'m am glad to read that you don\'t hate women, I was concerned - thought maybe you had
some mother issues. I think it is safe to guess that you appreciate any reaction positive or negative.
The chapter was action packed, the visuals worked I could follow what was going on (I think it is harder to
write action sequences [especially multi-character] than say lemon/smut - just my opinion). I\'m relieved
you let Hermione defend herself with and without her wand. Draco is just creepy - are we going to get any
POV from him? He started the entire confrontation...the rescue part didn\'t really make sense for me. Or
should I just take it for granted that he is an arogant Pureblood and that is simply is it.
Happy ending? I sure hope so, I\'m thinking now that this long journey may just end wherein your
Hermione comes away with ... subjugating herself to NO MAN.
25 chapters (plus the ones that are gone) it has been an interesting piece about a girl/woman from a man\'s
perspective. Until next update, thanks.
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, what an action-packed chapter! All of the guys thatought they were going to be getting some and their plans were ruined. LOL! That\'s what they get! Hehe! Anyway, I like that you make Draco have some redeeming qualities. People seem to forget that no one is 100% evil. I know Draco has some good in him and even though Hermione has tried time and time again to break of their engagements, I can tell she is still attracted to him. Wonderful chapter. Looking forward to the next one!
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Cheers* Yeah! Just the type of chapter I was looking forward to. Go girls!!! ^_^
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice, she\'s learned to fight off the imperio, very interesting indeed, and now Draco\'s brought in a gang ... doesn\'t look good for Ms. Granger at all. looking forward to seeing if and how Hermione gets out of this!
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe I missed the update! I wish this site had an Author Alert thing like the one on fanfiction.net.
Anyway, this chapter was interesting to read. Hermione finally faught the curse, but I\'m concerned about what would happen to her with the whole Slytherin Quidditch team gathered around her. I do hope that Myrtle would do something to help her.
Anyway, this chapter was interesting to read. Hermione finally faught the curse, but I\'m concerned about what would happen to her with the whole Slytherin Quidditch team gathered around her. I do hope that Myrtle would do something to help her.