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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Applauds* Utter masterpiece! I\'ve been completely hooked from the start and its all your fault. I can\'t wait for Harry\'s story. And I\'m just so eager to know how it\'ll end for all of them. Brilliant fic!!!!!!! ^_^
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, Harry\'s story is next? Looking forward to it.
So Draco\'s still obsessed with Hermione and clearly out for vengeance. Hermione\'s in love with Harry. Is he going to hurt Hermione via Harry? Or is he going to keep outright stalking her?
Great story.
So Draco\'s still obsessed with Hermione and clearly out for vengeance. Hermione\'s in love with Harry. Is he going to hurt Hermione via Harry? Or is he going to keep outright stalking her?
Great story.
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel that I need to review since you took the trouble to finish
this story. I would be lying if I said I was happy with the way
you ended it, but that is because I am such an H/Hr shipper,
and you left this open ended with Draco. You are a great
story teller and especially good at the sex scenes. None
the less I doubt I will read any of your future stories,
because they don\'t follow my ship. Thank you, though,
for a great story.
this story. I would be lying if I said I was happy with the way
you ended it, but that is because I am such an H/Hr shipper,
and you left this open ended with Draco. You are a great
story teller and especially good at the sex scenes. None
the less I doubt I will read any of your future stories,
because they don\'t follow my ship. Thank you, though,
for a great story.
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The End? I hope not. Though I am looking forward to reading Stud!Ron\'s story, and Harry\'s story too.
I am definitely NOT in the \"fall in love with your rapist\" camp - especially for this fic (no Hermione/Draco shipping from me); if she is not with Harry then how about a nice OC maybe a Ravenclaw for her to have a healthy relationship with in any sequel you may write. It feels like you \"kissed\" on her self discovery but that she\'s still realising. Was that your intention? Then you did marvelously.
Not sure what to make of your final note to me...I think it was good? I don\'t remember flaming, but I may have for that Dumbledore/Hermione bit. It still gives me the shivers thinking about it.
Good luck to you dude - I vaguely remember you have another story out there, I\'ll be keeping an eye out for more postings. Definitely keep me on your e-mail notice list (and consider joining RestrictedSection.org - just in case AFF gives up the ghost.)
Take care and Happy New Year.
I am definitely NOT in the \"fall in love with your rapist\" camp - especially for this fic (no Hermione/Draco shipping from me); if she is not with Harry then how about a nice OC maybe a Ravenclaw for her to have a healthy relationship with in any sequel you may write. It feels like you \"kissed\" on her self discovery but that she\'s still realising. Was that your intention? Then you did marvelously.
Not sure what to make of your final note to me...I think it was good? I don\'t remember flaming, but I may have for that Dumbledore/Hermione bit. It still gives me the shivers thinking about it.
Good luck to you dude - I vaguely remember you have another story out there, I\'ll be keeping an eye out for more postings. Definitely keep me on your e-mail notice list (and consider joining RestrictedSection.org - just in case AFF gives up the ghost.)
Take care and Happy New Year.
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IS THIS THE END OF THE STORY? OR IS THERE A SEQUEL? I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS A GOOD STORY. I LIKE D/HR STORIES. ACTUALLY LOVE THEM.
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Rubberduck!
No problem with the long review. I figured, since you wrote this looong story - which seems to have so much thought put into it - you deserved a long review.
Well - I guess I joined in just as you were ending the story. It was a very nice ride, I tell you. I enjoyed it very much, and I actually liked the ending - except
for two things:
1. Doesn\'t Malfoy get to pay for his actions? As much as I adore the sexy little git - he shouldn\'t be getting away with this. He should be expelled - or sent to
Azkaban for that matter!
2. Dumbledore!!! He should get his ass kicked and be sent off to Azkaban as well!!
Well, I\'m glad that you don\'t like the Dumbledore chapter either. As I wrote in my long review, I can see how it fits in the story. But maybe you could make the
chapter less graphic?? That would be nice! I think it would work better if you wrote it as a flashback, not actually describing graphically what happens, but
describing the feelings Hermione has when thinking about what happened in Dumbledores office.
If you do rewrite the Dumbledore chapter - or make any changes to the story, would you care to let me know??
If you write a sequel, I\'ll sure be following it :o)
I\'m very curious about your Harry-story as well. I\'m curious to see if I\'ve figured him out, or if I was wrong :o)
Happy New Year!
No problem with the long review. I figured, since you wrote this looong story - which seems to have so much thought put into it - you deserved a long review.
Well - I guess I joined in just as you were ending the story. It was a very nice ride, I tell you. I enjoyed it very much, and I actually liked the ending - except
for two things:
1. Doesn\'t Malfoy get to pay for his actions? As much as I adore the sexy little git - he shouldn\'t be getting away with this. He should be expelled - or sent to
Azkaban for that matter!
2. Dumbledore!!! He should get his ass kicked and be sent off to Azkaban as well!!
Well, I\'m glad that you don\'t like the Dumbledore chapter either. As I wrote in my long review, I can see how it fits in the story. But maybe you could make the
chapter less graphic?? That would be nice! I think it would work better if you wrote it as a flashback, not actually describing graphically what happens, but
describing the feelings Hermione has when thinking about what happened in Dumbledores office.
If you do rewrite the Dumbledore chapter - or make any changes to the story, would you care to let me know??
If you write a sequel, I\'ll sure be following it :o)
I\'m very curious about your Harry-story as well. I\'m curious to see if I\'ve figured him out, or if I was wrong :o)
Happy New Year!
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Much appreciation from an avid reader.
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December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl Power! Too Cool. Enjoyed this chapter very much.
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! I thought they might, just might end up together at some point happily ever after. AHHH! I look forward to seeing how you finish it.
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Rubberduck, I hope you can forgive my absence in the last couple of months. Life has been a bit hectic but the good thing is I now get to read 2 new chapters in each story! And just so you know, I