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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looking good so far. Harry seems to have viscious anger hidden in there. He\'s not going to be cruel to Hermione is he???
Looking forward to more!
Looking forward to more!
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Stories getting interesting, especially with all thses girls chasing after oblivious Ron. If this ends up Harry/Hermione I sure wouldn\'t mind. Either way, cool story.
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far, please continue writing.
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Is this going to be harry and everybody or just harry ginny? Either way great start. Email me when you update.
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good first two chapters. I especially like how at ease Ginny was even after Harry\'s little accident. Keep it up... hehehe.
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Harry has been coted ted by \'innocent\' Ginny... Update...
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January 20, 1920 at 12:00 AM
gut-wrenchingly thrilling! lol i loved that!
poor harry
poor katie bell when she finds out bout ron,
i kno they wernt going out but she stil wants
more dunt she and he obviously forgot bout
her pretty quickly
love it love it love it
Ravn xxx
poor harry
poor katie bell when she finds out bout ron,
i kno they wernt going out but she stil wants
more dunt she and he obviously forgot bout
her pretty quickly
love it love it love it
Ravn xxx
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January 20, 1920 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you actually DIDN\'T have sex in this chapter. I was downright refreshing that Lavender said No to Ron\'s advances. Wow! Someone wants to take it slow.
Maybe you want to have Bill talking to Harry and Ron in the next chapter. (For your writers block) I like Bill! He\'s yummy!
Cheers!
Maybe you want to have Bill talking to Harry and Ron in the next chapter. (For your writers block) I like Bill! He\'s yummy!
Cheers!
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January 20, 1920 at 12:00 AM
most of the time you have the gift of making a person feel as if they\'re in the story. by the way i\'m reading both stories.
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January 20, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Small critisim(sp) Lily has green eyes dude. Severus \"playing\" counsellor, interesting idea. Hermione doesn\'t know if she loves Draco, that\'s a little creepy, yet some how plausible. Where does she go from here? Looking forward to finding out, thanks for the update.