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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve come to a decision...I don\'t care about normal pairings. Hermione/Ron or Hermione/Harry or everyone and their cat, either way I love the plot. Nice Ron and Katie action. ^_^
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Generally love your story - the Dumbledore chapter hit my \"ick\" factor a bit high - kind of like a pedophilic St. Nick, I guess - but otherwise, it\'s been terrific.
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wowza...I like your story so fbut but i have to say the Dumbeldore thing was very.....well....Ick is the word. If its part of a bigger plot (like maybe over sexualizing Hermione in a negative way which tends to happen when older men initiate younger women) ill buy it. IF not it will always just be eww. BUT i did love the next part :)! Over all, great story. The Dumbeldore part seems overly right now, but im sure you will make it better.
(You had me cause i began to think Bill would be the first person to take that \'inappropriate\' step.)
(You had me cause i began to think Bill would be the first person to take that \'inappropriate\' step.)
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
need some british help eh? well here is a little bit for ya: snog:kiss. jumper:basic day dress. anything else just e-mail me.
great start by the way.
great start by the way.
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Nice story you\'ve written, and I\'ve liked it so far, but I wonder if the last chapter wasn\'t a litte too much out-of-style, if you know what I mean ^^;;. Dumbledore doesn\'t really strike most people like a person who\'d give her an \"education\" like that, I think... but don\'t they say that the older the person who\'s \"teaching\" is, the better is is and the more you learn? :D. But I still think your original idea of making this chapter a dream sequence was better. But now, anyway, I hope that Hermione will be using what she learnt on Harry/Ron ;D. Anyway, it\'s overall a good fanfic you\'ve made so far! Carry on and good luck :).
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy most of it. Especially the Malfoy/Crabbe/Goyle and their quasi-rape of Hermione. I think the Dumbledore thing is pushing it a little, and maybe would have been better as a dream sequence, but it\'s fine as it is. I just . . . never thought of Dumbledore as a pedophile . . . or any form of sexual being whatsoever . . . oh well. He must have banged someone at sometime in his life . . .
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygod! Dumbledore?! Well, you\'ve managed to shock the hell outta me--and that\'s a good thing. Please, please, please update quickly! ^_^
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...I never thought Dumbledore had it in him...shew....
Shocking indeed. Not even Ie bee been able to write about sex and Dedoredore.
Red
Shocking indeed. Not even Ie bee been able to write about sex and Dedoredore.
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was reading your story and i want to be honest in the beginning i hated everything about stories, toys, movies, and etc. However my opinion has completly changed and i can\'t get enough HP. I am loving this story and i can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Drooling over Bill Weasley* Anyway, great chapter like always. Especially loved that \'Now that the pissing contest is done, let\'s get down to business\' line. Dying for more. The title alone is enough to keep me interested. ^_^