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for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

by rubberduck

person lacey weasley
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It would be evil to leave it there. Let Draco learn his lesson with or without Hermione. Let Hermione have some fun for once.
person Mercika
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
End? Excuse me ... END?!?!? How can that be the freaking end? You can\'t leave it like that! Why didn\'t the bad guy loose? Why isn\'t she with anyone? This has been a great story so far ... why would you end it like that? Please consider adding a little bit to it or something.
This has been a great story, but to be honest ... I\'m not sure the ending was at all what I expected.
~Mercika
person Mercika
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
End? Excuse me ... END?!? Okay, I\'m going to be honest here with you (and please don\'t hate me for doing so).
I was enjoying this fic very much, thought it was different but I\'d give it a shot. Now that your finished this fic, I\'m really disappointed.
Why would you end it like that? The Bad guy hasn\'t lost, nor did she end up A. happy or B. with someone she truely loves.

I was reading the review up above and decided they are right. Hermione is totally out of character. It\'s really sick and perverted, especially how she f*cked not only her best friend, her worst enemy but her headmaster? It\'s getting a little bit too unrealistic to me sorry.

I strongly suggest you try and make a better ending. And I\'m also VERY sorry if my opinion was too harsh, but I just wanted to be straight up with you.
person trattel
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story, do you have a web site for future updates,,,i am in love with your writing?
also where can i find your other stories??

hugs

keri
person Marc
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the salvage of Hermione, but this epilogue sounds like a story of Hercule Poirot without the last pages !
I have a plot , protagonists but no final.
Still feel hungry for the end.
person AriadneElda
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, the story is over
person Sali
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry to hear that this story is finishing- I really, really enjoyed it.
Well done, and I\'m looking foward to reading some of your other stories.
person betsy
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, just one question? Is Dumbledore EVER going to pay for his actions? I was just rereading chapter 4 and I\'m still stunned he got away with what he did to Hermione. Eck!
person Tracer
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Story...
Though, I have not yet read the very last chapter. I can\'t wait to see any Sequels that you may have coming...
You did a wonderful job writing this story. When it comes to reading, It takes a lot to keep my attention. And it takes a heck of a lot more to keep my interest when I leave something for more than a few days (I left this story for about 5 days).
Congratulations, this was an awsome story. And you have proven to be an awsome writer...


Sincerely,

Tracer
person mac
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not what I expected as an ending-but as they are only in their sixth year? I\'ll have to wait for the sequel :) Excellent writing!