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for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

by rubberduck

person shaolin
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woh Ron, Like what a stud!! LOL....Randy little fourth years....
yet again another hot chapter...Write me..got a question for ya!
Shaolin
person spaz141
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update
person oldwolf
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A supurb story so far. My only compliant, along with many others it seems, is the scene in Dumbldores office. My problem is, I can\'t imagain Dumbldore being able to get it up, even with magic. But mentally, it might be very helpful to Hermione, she does need to believe she\'s special. I still dread the thought of what Harry might do if he ever finds out about that incident. Albus is powerful, but Harry out for blood is just evil!
person cdog21
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the story but i just hate the way everybody switches up is it a HP/HG or HG/DM or HP/GW or somebody/somebody. Actually i could care less as long as it is good and makes sense (which by the way it is) I wil keep on reading so hurry up with the next chapter.
person shaolin
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey it\'s me again...still reading, still loving it..this chapter
was much lower on the gross out scale, but the shower
scene was es muey HOT...oh that lucky girl..how I hate
Gryffindor sluts...SO jealous...anyway write me if ant!ant!
Update soon!
person JennyLynn
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think the reason Dumbledore threw me is cause...well.....there isnt the \'sexy older man\' thing going, but the \"eww...is that my grandpa\" thing. But like i said, it was minimal squirk-age and i find the over all story very good. Merely adding my thoughts on that chapter.

Update soon!
person spaz141
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes you just need to shake things up and you are doing just that. Thanks.
person dragonlady sakura
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Dean and Ginny! That was an amazingly hot and sexy scene, especially with old Harry watching. Naughty boy. He definitely has a reason to be jealous...or does he? Anyway, spicy chapter. ^_^
person raven
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this just gets better, i think ginny should have heard him and confront him about it. malfoy needs a bit of action too in my opinion - o hell i want it all lol ;)
keep up the good work!
luv ravn xxx
person Rilla
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I\'ve been reading all along and I like this a lot. The Dumbledore scene didn\'t squick me out. I actually found it oddly...compelling. I\'m not sure if that makes me a freak, lol. It was very well written. I have a thing for creepy Dumbledore, though, I\'m just not brave enough to write him myself.