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I\'m happy that Harry had a chance to clear things up with Ginny. I suspect that things won\'t be so easy with Hermione. Is Hermione a lost cause? (no expecting an answer btw). I never thought of myself as neither though provoking nor insightful, thanks and you\'re welcome. Thanks.

Glad I could help. I really liked this last chapter with the interaction between Ginny and Harry. Oh and don\'t worry that it takes you a week to update, true art takes time, some writers put out poor chapters because they rushed themselves. A good story is always worth the wai can can\'t wait to see what you have in store. Harry seems to be having some insecurity issues... and I suppose I can understand why.

Surprisingly sometimes Harry\'s character makes me mad. I know he\'s had all this horrible stuff happen to him, but it seems like he thinks he\'s the center of everything. Had Harry (in your fic) really considered Hermione or Ginny\'s situation he would have thought differently about them both. Some people write Harry as the calm, unbiased type, but I don\'t see that. Look at his feelings towards Cedric Diggory in GoF. I think you have captured y\'sy\'s essence in your fic. The fact that he kind of has a duality of mind issue. It will be interesting to see how that turns out for him. Keep up the great work!

When i meant pop quiz i meant a pop\"QUIZ\" hint hint wink wink with
a certain DADA teacher. And before i forget good chapter but it\'s
tearing me up to see Harry like this he really needs to get his friends back.
Catch my drift.

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OK - I usually don\'t review, but this is the first time I have come across AFF and I was about to give up on anything meaninigful when I found your fic. At first I found it interesting and compelling, even the bit where Draco put her under the imperious and she was excited about it. The
Dumbledore encounter left me sick to my stomach, but I kept reading anyway. I kind of expecsomesomething like that from the title fof the fic. And, of course I loved the episode with Harry as I am very much an H/Hr shipper and thought there was a chance for a relationship there, even with her request to be put under imperius. The episode with Draco made me realize she is total perverted, but I still convinced myself she could be redeemed. I firgured you were going for a Story of O kind of thing, although I hoped you would back off of that theme. But when she came on to BIll, who did not try to subjugate her, it becomes apparent that she is just a nymphomaniac who is completely motivated by lust and the desire to be humiliated. Nobody except Dumbledore did anything to turn her into a sex slave - even Draco. All he wanted to do was rape her. He wasd perfectly willing to modify her memory and leave it at that. At any rate this whole story is COMPLETELY out of character for Hermoine, not to mention Dumbledore. You have cored ted two of my favorite characters,and I hate it. I will read one more chapter just to see if there is any possiblity of recemption (which I doubt) but if not, I will read no more.

Good. Missing friends is a god thing. Maybe this bunch will get their acts straight. But I\'m sure not too soon. ^_^

Actually you\'re very true they don\'t have to find out it would just be fun
to see the chaos it would create. And may i ask will there be a pop \"quiz\"
coming in the future possibly.

Well....Teddy could find out and blackmail Draco.... what would Daddy think if Draco was doing a mudblood??? he he he.... I dunno... but I love these stories!!!!! You have to continue soon!!!!!

rubberduck, Just finished Chapter 17 and I\'m ready for more. In fact, I dropped a shortcut out on my desktop. I\'ll be checking for an update every day - - - not that I\'m putting any pressure on you, of course. HA!!! I can\'t wait to see whateraceraction there will be between Dumbledore and Hermione in the future. What will the old headmaster say to her? How will she react to him? Is Hermione warped enough to make a trade with the old man? She does want to learn that little trick of the electrically charged fingertips, after all. Kind of leaves a little room for another encounter, huh? Hope it won\'t be long before the three musketeers get back together. I am wondering, though, just how you are going to go about that. Interesting . . . .

I love this fic! I am impressed that you used the imperious curse in the first place. So many authors seem to forget about that one and all torture seems to be done cru crucio. Well done. I liked the last chapter, it seems like the real Hermione has just woken up and she is on a warpath, lol! Well you set down some limitations with Draco using the imperious curse, but there are some things that could be touched upon. All pretty basic, I think in a way, the way you have writtermiormione in this fic anyways, is that she is a dominant character who secretly longs to be the submissive, away from all guilt of the action. It goes with out saying that what she needs is humility. That is what she gets from o, ao, a stripping of that bloody gryffindor pride. Remember that when you write it. The more degrading Draco makes it, the more it really means to her. Hope that helped some.