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Ugh, Hermione, I do hope she somehow pulls hereself out of this. Why are these encounters with Draco helping Hermione feel alive? Is her motivation becoming less about control and more about feeling or maybe controlling her feelings? Does she now think that they only way to feel anything is through these vile sexual acts? I think, intentionally or not, you are effectively demontrating, just how damaging sex without love can be. This is a very interesting character study. Thanks.

I just have a couple of things to say besides the obvious this
was once again a great chapter.

1. That was damn good writing for the quidditch match,
m me me want to play the game myself. I forgot i can\'t fly.
Oh well

2. For the love of God please i can\'t take it anymore. I swear
if those three don\'t get back together soon i\'m gonna
a
a damn curse on myself. Man this is some real heartbreaking
stuff i\'m crying just writing this . Well maybe not. Sorry for the
theatrics, but this is just so wrong for them to be like this. I don\'t
care how you do it get em drunk, use the damn curse on all of
em, or just make em play twister nobody can stay mad at
someone after a good game of twister. Whatever you do just
make em friends again capisce!

Excellent, an update. Glad to see Ron finally getting some credit and some popularity. And dont let that pesky writer\'s block stop you any longer....

Hope for another update soon!

i simply meant that someone was finally making hermione into something other than the \"miss goody two shoes\" that everyone else made her into. where did you come up with that tornado spell? that was cool! and why was harry feeling that buzzing in his scar?

plz, up date, im hooked!!!!

That\'s a side of Lavender I\'ve never seen, especially since she\'s always portrayed as a brainless slut. I liked it. And I\'m glad Harry feels lonely for his friends. Maybe he\'ll start making amends. Of course the Hermione and Draco bits I\'m eager to read more of. Will the shit hit the fan when Harry founds out those two are lovers? Update soon_^ d_^

Hee hee me? surprising? Its not that I think Hermione is a lost cause, more of asking a question that I expe no no answer.
IMO she is so messed up, hopefully you are leading up to Harry making a move to reconcile - then she will have a chance to talk about what is going on her mind. I hope your muse finds her way back to you and I do enjoy your story. Thanks.

Yay! New Chapter!!!! Ron is such a hound, but aren\'t all teenage boys. I\'m glad Harry is starting to come around and realize that maybe he should have given Hermione a chance to explain herself. I am sorry your suffering from writers block but it didn\'t seem like it to me! The whole time I was reading it, I wondered where Hermione was, I just don\'t think that she was in the library for some reason, lol! Well please update soon, I love reading this fic!

As always..i like the new chapter...keep going..
drop me a line if ya want...Shaolin

Ron oh Ron oh Ron.... He has definatly been bitten by the sex bug.

Really good chapter. Harry needs to swallow his pride and apologize to Ron. Anyway .

Please continue the good work will try to wait patiently for the next chapter.

SB

Thank you for responding to my review. You were a lot more gracious than I would have been, had our positions been reversed. I really don\'t hate your story, in fact I think your storytelling is very compelling. I just have a bit of a problem with some of the character portrayals. I can understand exploring ones sexuality, but it seems it can be done without gettin one\'s self exploited and degraded. And if Hermoine was just looking for some one to make her feel wanted and loved she could have had that in Harry early on.

Actually I liked this chap. I was getting a little tired of Harry feeling sorry for himself, and I like way way Ginny is making him see everything doesn\'t revolve around him. I keep hoping that he will be able to forgive Hermoine and they can find love in each other. ful ful thinking, eh? Anyway please going and I will try to keep a more open mind.