rate_review Reviews

When rst rst started reading i thought \"what the hell Harry is evil now\" until
i got to the part where it was a dream. Very good. On to your question you
can keep em or loose em their more of a bounus in most of the cases save
for D/H, that is just something else, so it\'s up to you. And before i forget another
great chapter and i can\'t wait for the next chapter however you should just forget
about Hermoine for right now and focus on getting Harry and Ron back togethe Try Trying to get the guys back with Hermoine is going to be a..... well it\'s probably
going to be a story in it\'s own self so just worry about that later.

I guess I\'ve been put in my place. For Hermione the sole motivation is having an orgasim? Okay. I\'ll except that. In answer to your question, yes - none involved having a broom stick shuved up my rectum though.

Chapter 21 - I feel bad for Harry, the guy just can\'t catch a break. As always and interesting story with many sub-plots, thanks.

Another outstanding chapter, rubberduck. You definitely have a gift.

I don\'t know what to say. I loved the 2 previous chapters and I am sorry I did\'t review them when I was in an upbeat mood. This chapter, however, has left me seriously depressed. Not just the sex act, although it was seriously depraved. It is Hermoines attitude about it. Using the imperious curse was a neat trick in the beginning, but it\'s really no longer necessary. She knows exactly what she is doing under the curse and is controlling it as much herself as Draco is (i.e. strip tease). OK she may have been forced to lap up the floor, but beyond that, what\'s the point of the curse? She is enjoying this way too much. And the fact that she enjoys the fact that she was degraded. How is she ever going to enjoy normal, loving sex? I guess my hope that she and Harry would eventually get together, which was fueled by the previous 3 chaps, is just not going to happen.

On the up side, I love the rest of the story. I think you have done a great job flushing out your characters (with the exception of Dumbledore and Hermoine) and having them develope pretty much the way I would expect them to in canon once they start getting into the opposite sex. I think most of your sex scenes are wonderful (I love straight, consensual sex (but not rape or degrading sex). I think you show a lot of humor and passion in them. Also you quiddich match was excellent!

Enough rambling. Maybe I\'m taking this whole story too seriously. I guess it\'s because I love HP bHP books so much, and because of my preconceived ideas regarding H/Hr, I find your protrayal of Hermoine very hard to take. I hope at least if Harry can\'t find love with Hermoine he can find it with someone else - or at least have a little fun!! Thanks and please keep writing!

YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! Hermione and Draco finally get it on!!!! And I like how demanding she was with her proposition. Usually it\'s the other way around. ome ome scene, awesome chapter!

Wow! Whatta chapter!!!! Draco is somthing else! Lucius would probably be proud of him degrading Hermione in both a sexual and physical matter. Lucius strikes me as the type that would rape and degrade anyone he deems of lower status, and mudbloods would definitely qualify in that category. I know that Lucius is in Azkaban, but it would be cool if she began an attraction to the elder Malfoy as well. Hey, she already did Dumbledore, how about an experienced, older, not to mention sexy wizard? I\'m sure Lucius would like some nookie, especially from an attractive, horny teen like Hermione! LOL Please update soon. I love the Draco/Hermione smut scnenes! *licks lips*

sorry - its been a while
its gettin verry gud! cant believe i missed this much
wel i cant wait for the next update
lota of luv
Ravn

Great Chapter! I knew it. Hermione likes the guilt free but guilt laden sex! MWAHAHA! It\'s just the thing for that Bossy little know-it-all! She can only feel guilty for feeling the way she does, but any of the acts she commits are guilt free because she is under the imperious! Brilliant, absolutely Bloody Brilliant! Great portrayal of Draco, although I would like him to develop a soft spot for her, what can I say, I am somewhat of a romantic.... blah, blah, blah! Thanks for updating, please update again soon!

*Mouth hangs open AGAIN* Holy Crap! You sure as hell keep surprising me. Hermione and Draco are...interesting together to say the least. Poor screwed up Hermione...snif, snif.

wow that was steamy. but I agree with spaz141. she\'s going in a bad bad downward spiral. she\'s experienced sex, she needs someone to show her what its like to make love. Harry (perferably for me), Ron, Neville, some caring guy I have looked over. But Draco isn\'t doing her any favores besides showing her verious sexual possitions. gotta love that use of the broom though.

keep up the great work!