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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another Great Chapter, sorry if I missed this sooner, I have been working on a fic of my own. But rest assured, I will never fail to review your fic. I\'m dying to know whats going to happen now. This was such an interesting chapter. You set yourself up for a big chapter or tw fol follow, or at least it seems so. What was the spell that Hermione used on Draco during the duel? If it was Expelliarmus it was awful powerful. I can\'t tell you enough how much I like Bill Weasley in this fic, there\'s just something about the way you write his character. Well, until next time. ~ Hanna
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh yes, chap 14, that was a good one, but lets see a Harry and Hermione scene where Harry doesn\'t look a gift horse in the mouth? maybe even toward the end let Hermione give Harry a lesson or two. but in no hurry for that, and if you don\'t use it it\'s only a suggestion.
two chapters no sex ... I\'m going into withdrawal, lets see somemore fun in the next chapter please?
two chapters no sex ... I\'m going into withdrawal, lets see somemore fun in the next chapter please?
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was mine that started with \"Ahh chap 14\" or what ever, not sure what happened there ^^;;;;
anyway, again good fic, keep up the good work
anyway, again good fic, keep up the good work
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story! keep updating pleeeezzee
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
grand story really. i read it every time i get the chance. hey can you tell me what is gonig to happen to the awsom threeo?
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no dissappointment at all, infact I expected it.
all I ask is either:
1) Harry and Hermione get atleast one lovene ene and/or get together (sex will suffice)
2) Harry beats the holy shit out of Draco for corrupting his best friend
3) both
this is a great fic and got some hot sex scenes, I applaud you! (maybe see some group sex sometime please?)
all I ask is either:
1) Harry and Hermione get atleast one lovene ene and/or get together (sex will suffice)
2) Harry beats the holy shit out of Draco for corrupting his best friend
3) both
this is a great fic and got some hot sex scenes, I applaud you! (maybe see some group sex sometime please?)
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, lots of plot and the dream sequence with Harry was top notch... worthy of JKR herself. I however have to disagree that all the sex scenes should end. But you don\'t have to write one every chapter. Not all of us are about smut, but when it plays a role in the plot line is is when it is worth while. If that makes any sense. I will read regardless. I am anxious to see where you will go from here. So many possibilities and so much talent to put to good use. Well I think I will wait for the next chapter before I say much more. Update soon!
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i swear the next person who makes professor Dumbeldore out to be some child molesting sicko is getting kicked in the antique chicken coup. You were writing such a good story up till this point.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH come on give poor Harry a break doesn\'t he have enough on his shoulder, and what about Hermoine I still do not why why she in to S&M and with Draco of alopleople.Harry needs Hermoine Got let him hel her maybe see a shrink or something, at least let him give her want she want s so that they go be together. H/HR shipper and proud of it.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Abolish all sex from this story? Sacrilege! I kid. Either way I\'ll keep reading. Thought Harry\'s dream supesuper creepy. Like Harry\'s slowing becoming one with Voldemort. *Shudders* Though Malfoy getting punished was interesting. Not much loyality among Death Eaters is Bellatrix is an example. Anyhoo, freakin good chapter.