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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter! I wonder how they are going to react when they find out that Hermione has beoingoing Draco, and liking it!!!!! I can see the sparks flying then. LOL Great work. ;)
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Update! It\'s good to see the wonder duo trying to work out there problems. Even if someone had to urge them to do so. I wonder if Draco is going to keep up with his little games. Well I\'m sure it will be answered in the next chapter!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the story is great! Long but great! The sex scenes are pretty steamy. I loved all chapters except for the chapter with Dumbledore and Hermione. It was a little disgusting for me... Anyway, can we have more?
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter. Loved seeing Draco shirtless. Hehe. Always gets my nipples hard. LOL Lemons next time, please? With Draco and Hermione. :)
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m gonna keep it short and sweet great chapter once again
i almost wish it was Harry against Draco i love it when they fight
and funny how i said something about focusing on Ron and
Harry for a sec and then behold Ch. 22 comes out hmm :)
i almost wish it was Harry against Draco i love it when they fight
and funny how i said something about focusing on Ron and
Harry for a sec and then behold Ch. 22 comes out hmm :)
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your dialogue. The tension between characters is very real. I really like your take on Bill.
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No need to apologise really. I needed to realize that I was reading too much into your story. Even though it wasn\'t your intial intention, it has become a characters study.
Chapter 22 - IMO smut isn\'t necessary in every chapter. Ron and Harry are trying and Hermione is making an effort in her own way, hopefully they will reconcile(sp). I was hoping for a Harry and Hermione to develope a real relationship, I\'m pretty sure now that will not happen. Still interesting, still reading, still reviewing...thanks.
Chapter 22 - IMO smut isn\'t necessary in every chapter. Ron and Harry are trying and Hermione is making an effort in her own way, hopefully they will reconcile(sp). I was hoping for a Harry and Hermione to develope a real relationship, I\'m pretty sure now that will not happen. Still interesting, still reading, still reviewing...thanks.
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No sex in the Hogwart\'s Castle huh? That\'s ok,
I have the opposite problem...I can flow like
a river when I\'m writing smut, but dry
up to a slow trickle when it comes to actual
talking..mmm sounds like some guys I know..
Not you duck..LOL..keep going!
I have the opposite problem...I can flow like
a river when I\'m writing smut, but dry
up to a slow trickle when it comes to actual
talking..mmm sounds like some guys I know..
Not you duck..LOL..keep going!
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, juicy chapter. And bravo to Hermione for getting a little back at Draco. Of course, I\'m sure he\'ll make her pay for it later. LOL. And now that Harry\'s heard of Hermione\'s \'boyfriend\', what will he do? Dying to know!!!
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haven\'t read your story yet, but I just had to tell you I love the warning, read at your own arousal, lol. In case your wondering I copy and paste the fics I read onto my ipac and just read at my own leisurely pace. I just wanted to comment on the warning. love it, lol.