rate_review Reviews

i started reading your story along time ago,i forgot to save it,and i lost it in all the other stories i was reading.so when und und it again,and saw that you added more, i was thrilled.it\'s excellent.will ron and harry find out about hermione and draco,by accident or will she confess?

actually the way this story has been going is not bad really.
Crap crap crap you just had to crush my hopes you could
have let a guy pretend for a little while. I hope the next
chapter is good but i don\'t know why i have to worry they
have all been real good.

I keep getting this fuzzy vision that sooner or later Harry\'s gonna catch Draco and Hermione doing something not so nice.

and not to worry my opinion of Hermione isn\'t lowering, though I find it surprisingly very much in character for her to fall into a trap like this.

I really like thi this story\'s coming along. great story elements. now more sex please!

Well, at least the trio is making some sort of headway. All those hurt feelings and such...sigh, they better make up. LOL. Great chapter and sex or no sex, I\'m reading it. ^^

Chapter 24 - It would appear that the trio are on there way to becoming friends again. My hope, well...I\'ll just keep that to myself. What happened at the end with Hermione, does that mean we will be entertained with another disturbing sexual encounter between Hermione and Draco? Thanks for the update.

Duckie - (may I call you Duckie?)

Damn - I had a long review all written out and I
accidentally deleted it before I could submit. Hope
I can reconstruct it. Sorry to be so long in reviewing-
broken leg kept me away from the PC. I really
enjoyed your last 3 chapters. Those who criticize
the lack of sex should realize that you aritiriting
a story, not just a series of sexual vignettes. I love
Harry once again being the stoic, heroic, yet very
insecure, heart-on-the-sleeve teenager. I\'m glad
he is reconciling with Ron. What\'s up with our girl?
Does she love Harry, as it first seems when she tries
to ingratiate herself? Or is it Mr Blue Eyes (Ron, not Bill)?
or does she just love the sexual tension she gets
from Draco? I can only hope she and Harry will
eventually find each other (hopeless romantic).
Two things - Bellatrix jumping up and down and
clapping her hands gleefully? Seems a bit out of
character. Moaning orgasmically or cruel comments,
maybe. Second, while I understand and accept your
observation that canon indicates R/Hr I feel there is
a good case for H/Hr as well. I d god go so far as to
accept brief Ron but eventually it has to be Harry.
We could go into examples sometime, if you would
like. Anyhoo - great storytelling.
Can\'t wait for the next update. Thanks, Tray

eh, I always thought Draco should cetch eboli and burn in hell, but that\'s just my personal opinion, and what he\'s done to Hermione in this case isn\'t helping him any in my b (ev (even though she does want it)

anyway ... I really like how the characters are playing out in this, and no I would say Hermione\'s a horse, yet anyway, see how the story progresses then I\'ll revisit that ^^

Yeah 66.6666% of the trio is back together and the other 33.3334% is almost here
or are you just raising my hopes before you shatter them la wia window. Well
whatever happens i am absolutely loving this story and i can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Chapter 23 - I may just have a glimmer of hope. Ron/Harry dialogue was very good, and to Harry for calling Ron on Risa only being 14. Interesting developments, unit next time.

*Wags finger* You terrible, naughty tease, you! As if biting my nails wasn\'t enough, you have me in suspense. Again. Thally,lly, Harry and Ron stopped acting like asses or better yet, immature boys (which they truly are) and made up. Now they need to do something about Hermione. The fur will fly when all is revealed. LOL. Love it! =D