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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story keep it comeing
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another terrific chapter... keep it up. Update again soon... I loved the duel between Harry and McGonagall!
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter... but somehow I\'m starting to feel that Draco is becoming bored with having her under the curse. Am I wrong? Does he want her willing? I mean, ultimately, she is willing. She wants to be under the curse, but you know what I mean...
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good! I must say that I enjoy it, though I think that Hermione has bitten off a little more than she could chew with letting Draco put the curse on her all the time.
I know you probarly get this all the time, but I didn\'t really like the Dumbledore scene all that much though. I mean, it wasn\'t bad writing or anything, but I guess Dumbledore always seems to be above that sort of thing.
Your whole story is great though! You have built up an interesting plot, your spelling and grammer are great and I must say I was impressed with you didn\'t give Harry all \'O\' OWLs. I read a fic where he got straight \'O\'s, but if you read the story, there are subjects such as Divina and and History of Majic that he didn\'t do too well in.
My complements to you!
I know you probarly get this all the time, but I didn\'t really like the Dumbledore scene all that much though. I mean, it wasn\'t bad writing or anything, but I guess Dumbledore always seems to be above that sort of thing.
Your whole story is great though! You have built up an interesting plot, your spelling and grammer are great and I must say I was impressed with you didn\'t give Harry all \'O\' OWLs. I read a fic where he got straight \'O\'s, but if you read the story, there are subjects such as Divina and and History of Majic that he didn\'t do too well in.
My complements to you!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Reading the duel between Harry and McGonnagall, all I could think of was Cartman saying \"kick ass\". Harry is an awesome duelist! Loved it.
Still want Draco to be squashed like a bug and for someone to slap some sense into Hermione. Perhaps Ginny could do that in the next chapter? I personally would love to see that.
Still want Draco to be squashed like a bug and for someone to slap some sense into Hermione. Perhaps Ginny could do that in the next chapter? I personally would love to see that.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Excellent! The duel was very exciting - you do a great job on the action stuff (quidditch, etc.) Poor confused Hermoine. She sure didn\'t do the trio relationship any good when they tried to talk to her. Especially since she know how hard it is for \"stubborn boys\" to take the first step. She is pulling herself in so many directions. Hope Ginny can help her sort this out. Will Hermoine tell Ginny about Draco? Will Ginny tell her about her encounter with Harry? Wonder what she wants to try out on Malfoy? Hope she has learned a spell to turn him into a girl, and someone uses the Imperius on shim. I appreciate your comments on my review but I really don\'t think I can offer anything that will make your story better. I can only hope to affect the outcome, which, as you know, is all about Harry and Hermoine hooking up. Update soon - update often!
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Yeah, I am definitely into your story - check regularly for updates. Can\'t wait for the next
chapter. But you are wrong about one thing - I love sex. Especially consensual sex. Anyway, I am glad to see
Ron and Harry back together again. It\'s also fun having Ron be the voice of reason for a change. Good job with
Hermoine, also. She sounds much more like the Hermoine I know and love. Too bad Harry is still so into
himself. He needs to get over himself and take some initiative if he want to get Hermoine back, as a friend or
more. I am unsure about your dialogue with Cowboy, but I do not think you are making Draco too mean. He is
more than capable of what he is doing and I think you have captured him perfectly in character. Seems like you
are making a real effort to bridge this to OotP, and if so, you are doing a great job. As always, I am looking for
H/Hr, but I know which ever way you go, it will be interesting. Can\'t wait for the next update. Thanks!
Tray
chapter. But you are wrong about one thing - I love sex. Especially consensual sex. Anyway, I am glad to see
Ron and Harry back together again. It\'s also fun having Ron be the voice of reason for a change. Good job with
Hermoine, also. She sounds much more like the Hermoine I know and love. Too bad Harry is still so into
himself. He needs to get over himself and take some initiative if he want to get Hermoine back, as a friend or
more. I am unsure about your dialogue with Cowboy, but I do not think you are making Draco too mean. He is
more than capable of what he is doing and I think you have captured him perfectly in character. Seems like you
are making a real effort to bridge this to OotP, and if so, you are doing a great job. As always, I am looking for
H/Hr, but I know which ever way you go, it will be interesting. Can\'t wait for the next update. Thanks!
Tray
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! Don\'t worry about the lack of smut, I love the way you develop the story and that is more important than the sex. Me personally, the greatest benefit of this site is the lack of censorship... it\'s not always about smut, but if it comes into play then it is allowed to do so. No creative bars so to speak. Keep up the good work. Hope Harry and Hermione can work it out in the next chapter.... wink, wink!
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah..another good chapter...piss on the Goodie Gyffindors! LOL!
Where is my Draco!!!! You know only Slytherins turn my crank...
do it for me huh? We NEED to get together in the new chat room,
I\'m here afternoons after Days of Our Lives...(Yeah i know, be quiet)
and late nights...you know I work those crazy bars hours...If i see you
are on AFF i will e-mail you to come chat..sweet...o tay must write more smut...
and please check out my new DarkStalkers fic...it only has one review...
it\'s in Anime Misc...Snootchie Bootchies....Shaolin
Where is my Draco!!!! You know only Slytherins turn my crank...
do it for me huh? We NEED to get together in the new chat room,
I\'m here afternoons after Days of Our Lives...(Yeah i know, be quiet)
and late nights...you know I work those crazy bars hours...If i see you
are on AFF i will e-mail you to come chat..sweet...o tay must write more smut...
and please check out my new DarkStalkers fic...it only has one review...
it\'s in Anime Misc...Snootchie Bootchies....Shaolin