rate_review Reviews

Well, the most I can say here is that if you really need to separate the plots into different stories to make it possible to finish then do it. Since I am hoping for an H/Hr ending I think you should put Harry and Hermione\'s story together to have it tie together in the end with Harry looking for love and finding it with Hermione and Hermione looking for sexual satisfaction and finding it with Harry, hopefully without him having to put an Unforgiveable on her.

Anyways, I hope you get advice that will be more helpful than mine and be able to finish the story soon.

~Amaya

I\'ll give it some thought and give you a longer response another time. I\'m glad you are pulling the stories apart. It\'s kind of why I never reviewed. I always felt like I was reading a mish-mash of a bunch of really good chapters thrown together, but it didn\'t seem to come together as a whole and I wasn\'t sure how to say that. It\'s a lot easier to word it once you know that the author agrees.

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mmmmmmmmmm, i love!!! keep going, and bring back the sex!! lol!!

harry beat mcgonagall, harry beat mcgonagall!!! ^_^

Hi, great writings must I say, but all this sexual madness of Hermione makes me feel \"sick\".
What does she want ?
I still can\'t understand her or you.
I truelly believe I would like this to end as a HHr pairing for it seems that only Harry really cares for her: no forcing, no magic involved but love.
Hermione seems too wise to fall only for power, neither Dumbledore, nor Draco should be match for her but a caring sweetheart like Harry
That\'s what I believe.
Marc

Hi, first at all, let\'s introduce my self. My name is Mirta . I live in Buenos Aires.

As a professional reader, I spent the most part of my time reading.ead ead every
little peace that I receive. At the present, I am working in a paper about Fan fics.
I choose Harry Potter books, because it became in a literary boom worldwide.

I don\'t usually post my opinion on the sites, but with all my respect, your work
was really offensive to me. I know that these site is for adult reader. I know the
game rules, but your work have not a plot, is bore and totally incredible. When I
was reading it, I thought that I am watching a cheaper porno movie; because
situations are completing unbelievable.

The weak in your work, is that you don\'t respect the character\'s personalities.
Because, Harry Potter never could sleep with Ginny in the Wesley\'s backyard,
just because they were alone. Ginny is not that kind of girl, and most important
Harry is not that kind of man.

But the really incredible was \"Hermione

I suppose it can\'t be too easy but this chapter was just screaming for
them to get back together but that damn Malfoy got in the way again.
Well whar har happens i know i will enjoy it completly so update soon k

and things become slight more clear. Here\'s to Hermione eventually finding a healthier form of fulfillment. thanks.

i think that sometime in your story that hermione should finally get some*balls*and figure out what she wants,and get it,then back fire the curse on draco ,and make him do what ever she wants.make her very powerful witch.

Masterpiece in the making here! All this tension and the emotional roller coaster ride makes me grateful I\'m finished my teenaged years. Yikes. Do love the teasing, sexual banter Draco and Hermione share. How she can\'t resist even though she despises him. Still, when will idiot Harry and Ron catch on something is very wrong with her? Boys! Clueless at times. ^_^