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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My vote is for Harry, I had almost given up on this story. Glad to know there was another chapter.
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you\'re showing some of Hermione\'s internal dialogue. She questioning herself finally. Her conclusions will of course be up to you, but at least you have her now processing things. I take he the three stories will inter-twine? Should be interesting. Thanks.
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione, she is so confused. Hope Draco isn\'t planning on hurting her or anything. In saying hurting her, I mean bad hurt not good hurt.
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now don\'t get me wrong I like some smut of course, thats why I\'m spending time at aff. Heh. Thanks for updating, this chapter actually made me realize that I can relate to Hermione. After the first time things sort of spin out of control until your sleeping with your eighth guy since you turned fourteen, and he has a girlfriend. *End rant*
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whooa - you\'re back! I am so glad you decided to continue the story. Great job on the re-write. Like a skilled surgeon carefully removing the cancerous cells (not a good anology, since the parts you removed were also very good - maybe for another fic?). Anyway, the story seems much tighter now. Can\'t wait to see where you are going with this. Please update soon.
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me likes muchly!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. But the whole Dumbledore thing grossed me out quite a bit. I think I\'ll go re-read the Harry and Hermione bit. Oh, I hope they get together!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well damn. A lemon series with plot. And a decent one at that. Few and far between, these. I thank you for producing this one, though I gotta admit that my mind can\'t quite make that Leap for Hermione.
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you edited this one. It\'s a lot cleaner now and it is much easier to follow. Also, the story fits the title for all of the chapters now. I\'m really glad you reworked it but I hope the other chapters come back in some other form somtime. :) (the Dumbledore chapter is still squicky...but I\'m glad you left it in, it belongs in the story.)
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. Did Malfoy cast some kind of charm on Hermione to make her start acting this way?