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for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

by rubberduck

person Apollonia
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Now her girlfriends know! *shakes head* I wonder what\'s going to happen next. :P BTW, I meant the sexual stuff that Hermione goes through minus the degradation. But , then again, I don\'t mind a little spanking every in in a while. LOL Please continue! ;)
person Ashes
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm Draco. I mean, come on? How can you resist the bad guy? :D Interesting little chapter. I\'m looking forward to a new one!
person ddrinki4
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damnit, it\'s all Draco\'s fault Hermione\'s lost her freaking mind! Ooh, I hope he gets his in the end. Exceptional writing and plot. Brava to you.
person traydr vic
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, REAALLY GREAT CHAPTER!! Poor Hermione
person Your Friendly Lurker
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeee. great lemons, great ideas, dominant Draco is really a turn on.

But..

I\'m such a die hard H/Hr and D/G fan I struggle to keep reading. Seeing that D/Hr was already dismissed by Rowling and that Harry and Hermione in your fic are so gorgeous together, I really thought it was somehow going to become a H/Hr fic. Ah well, can\'t begrudge you your ship for that\'s what you like, but I do enjoy how you kept Hermione considerably in character.

Lovely fic so far and while I may not be too excited or inclined to continue it, I applaud you for great smut bunnies.

Cheers, Your Friendly Lurker
person Classic Cowboy
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice update, the scenes keep getting hotter and hotter.

and I was thinking, about something you said in one of the last chapter\'s review responces. while a D/Hr romance isn\'t unseeable, what we have here isn\'t a romance, this is just sex. they meet up, Hermione gets the curse, and Draco screws her. there is no caring involved, all that is cared for in that is the sex itself.

Hermione\'s in a bad spot, addiction is a scary thing, and another thing that worries me, this is a relationship made solely on sex. which means, chances are sooner or later, Draco will get board with Hermione, I mean, there\'s only so many ways you can really have sex. it will be a long (and fun ^^) road but he will run out of ideas soon, and Hermione will get boring to him. and if he isn\'t afraid of using one unforgivable, what say he won\'t try another when he\'s finished playing?
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How come people didn\'t like Pansy, I\'d always assumed that Malfoy would involve her sooner or later, he\'s a young teenage guy. Going with this story he enjoys sex and Pansy is his girlfriend or whatever he sees her. Pansy/Draco/Herms was expected. I like this story, thanks for the good writing.
person Ashes
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for continuing the story! I was about to give up hope. But Bravo, its awesome, I\'m anxious to see how it turns out though, I hope she ends up with Harry, even though Draco IS smolderingly hot.
person Apollonia
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an incredibly sexy chapter. Hehe. I like how Draco \"washed\" Hermione\'s mouth out. LOL \"Gargle. Swish it around.\" LOL I\'ve GOT to remember that! :P I could always picture myself in Hermione\'s position with Draco. ;) And I\'ll keep an open mind about Pansy for your story. :)
person spaz141
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I was so hopeful that Hermione was going back to Harry *sigh.* I keep looking for fluff when I know there will be none. You are the King, thanks.