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for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

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person traydr vic
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK that
person ddrinki4
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, wan uan update! Now that Snape knows, will he be getting involved too? Like is this going to take a Snape/Hermione turn? Either way, goodness abound. =D
person franky
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Well I have to say I liked some parts of the story, the one with harry and the one in the bathroom, very erotic that onw was, even if I would have preffered other caracther but hey. I I have to say that the part with dumbledore is a bIG fUCKING NO, NO FUCKING WAY, WHAT THE FUCK, in my mind, my oppinion of course, the same goes for draco. I gues it would be the same for all the other male carathers, the only one I like is Harry so when harry doesnt end up with the girl in the end Im annoyed, wich Im sure you dont care about but anyways. If you could just say who shes gonna end up with I would be very happy it would tell me if I should continue to read this story. If she end wit with draco or some other idiot male caracther Ill just stop reading it cause seriously for me it would be a waste of time. I just dont like anybody but Harry having sex, dont know why...Well just please tell me if it is or not a Harry Hermione. I just dont like rape. Oh and heres a request, I doubt youll do it but Ill put it anyways, if you could put an anal secene with harry and hermione, never d ond one on any site, very annoying, its all draco and some other girl or snape, dont know what the fixation with ugly old men it but seriously its pedophilia when you think about it, not that I would have cared to sleep with a 30 years old women at 15. I ts jsut very hard to find anything thats well written, has a good plot, isnt slash and has harry as a main caracter and then usually the sex scen are shitty. If you have any stories to recommend Id apreciate alot. And PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE dont make her sleep with snape. Its just not natural.....Please. Anyways I doubt youll listen or even read this but you never know what people will do so I just hope I get lucky and that you take waht I said in consideration. Tank you
good luck
person dragonlady sakura
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Claps loudly* Gotta hand it to you, this chapter was killer. I enjoyed the progress Harry and Hermione are having. As for Draco and Hermione--my goodness, that boy is terrible. But in a good way. I\'m conflicted on the whole Harry/Hermione, Draco/Hermione thing going on here. I don\'t know who, if anyone, she\'ll end up with. Anyway, brilliant chappie.
person autumnphilia
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o lau laughed out loud at the HG masturbation scene just imagining Snape\'s expression at catching her. A couple of questions, if he punished Malfoy, I assume he knows she was under Imperio? Five points seems a little light. Otherwise why punish Malfoy for HG\'s actions. I was reading quickly, I admit, but there do seem to be a lot of people who should by now be figuring out HG is in serious trouble and maybe asking her some hard questions. I personally am voting for her hooking up with Draco long term and joining an S&M club but I am rather a sick person. Good job, except for the Dunbledore bit, ewwww. Hope to see him punished for that.
person jabberwock
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Snape knows what Draco\'s been doing with Hermione outside of class? Does he know it was her idea? Or perhaps, he\'s saying \"its okay to put someone under Imperius in your own time, just not inside my classroom, when its disruptive to _me_.\" Intriguing possibilities. I am hoping for further Snape involvement. Personally, I\'m hoping he helps her, but if Dumbledore\'s a Dirty Old Man, we can\'t expect much from Snape can we? Here\'s to hoping. Just please, please, please don\'t make it a Draco/Hermione romance in the end. It wouldn\'t fit, unless you wanted to say that Hermione\'s downward spiral was ulitimately a good thing and that \"The Subjugation of Hermione Granger\" could also be called \"The Strange Case of Howet Met My Boyfriend.\"
person Apollonia
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Draco\'s a bad boy! LOL Having her maturbate in class, but I\'m not surprised. Once he\'s got you, it\'s no holds barred. Hehe. I wonder what Snape will do. Do I smell threesome - Draco/Hermione/Snape? Please update soon! :)
person Miki
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you the title is incorrect. Shouldn\'t it be - The Humiliation of Hermione Granger? Hehe...anyway scary scene, my heart beat like a drum hoping she wouldn\'t be caught. I even hid my face behind my hands in shame for crazy Hermione. She is completely off her rocker...but, I sort of like it. Update!
person spaz141
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man that was painful to read. What has Hermione gotten herself into? I thought I might vomit. Brilliant portrayal of humiliation, and still you have her \"get off.\" Ugh, I need to go lay down after this.
person Ashes
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh how embarassing for our poor Hermione! Ah well, you know she likes it. But I do hope this story has a happy ending. You know, that we aren\'t too jaded for fluff? :D