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for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

by rubberduck

person Classic Cowboy
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm so Lily went through the same thing huh? interesting. also leads one to hope she\'ll end up with Harry (Waves H/Hr flag futilely)

puts me in mind of what Jean Grey said in X-Men 2 \"you play with the bad boys but you take the good ones home\" or something like that.

excellent chapter. so when\'s Hermione going to get some again?
person Queen Sabreen
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, sorry for not reviewing earlier. i didn\'t know you updated. anyway I must say that this fic is getting quite fascinating. I\'m completely drawn into it and i can\'t wait until the next update. the fact hermione did that infront of snape was quite disturbing, but not as disturbing as dumbledore and his \"lesson.\" i was completey taken aback when i found out that snape wasn\'t ng ang advantage of her. i was expecting him to do something much else, but you had him be such a nice guy. all i can say is WOW...anyway i really wonder where this is going to lead. Will she get with harry or draco? I suppose i\'ll have to wait...but if waiting is the only way that\'s what I\'ll do. also I\'m sorry for the confusion, I get confused quite easily, maybe it\'s becuase I\'m simply a confused little girl...i wouldn\'t know, I\'m too confused to.

anyway update soon!
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In front of Snape, oh that was rich. His reaction was interesting, he is after all a worldly man. To think he\'s got higher moral values than Dumbledore. Good for him. I was wondering if they\'d get together, once again you surprised me. I think Draco\'s starting to have feelings for his mudblood too...he\'s kissing her and licking her ear...
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 11. This is fabulous! The writing is excellent. Very intriguing plot. Boy was I surprised that Hermione did Dumbledore! Dirty old boy. The sex scenes are very hot and imaginitive and ye gods I\'m glad there\'s alot more of the story left. I can sympathize with your computer problems too, I was about reeady to smash my laptop against thee wall. I had to wipe my hard drive clean and start over. I think that\'s easier than taking it in, if you have technical assistance to walk you through. Firewall and Virus protection. I\'m going to read some more juicy smut now...Lol
person Miki
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like that detention didn\'t involve Snape screwing her.
It makes it much more interesting. Especially his warning about Malfoy.
I like that you get the sense that this is just a part of growing up.
Self exploration and expression. All just part of life.
I wanted to die when Hermione got caught by Snape.
Stomach-tightening fear rushed through me.
This is getting more and more fascing.
g.
Update soon!
person Apollonia
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Now we know why Snape didn\'t have such a hard time with her shenanigans. And we now know that he and Lily have a past tryst together. Neat! :) I had a feeling Snape would be understanding. :P Well, can\'t wait to see what\'ll happen next. :)
person Ashes
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh I like the twist. And there was very little adult matter in that chapter! You should be ashamed of yourself! ;-P And a happy ending, you know, Hermione could grow out of it, fall in love with Harry. Or even Malfoy for fucks sake. :P
person ddrinki4
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, afterdingding this I\'m rather impressed by Snape. He didn\'t act like I assumed he would and I\'m kind of glad for it. Hermione needs all the help/advice she can get and Snape might be the guy. Also definitely liked the warm fuzzy moments the golden trio hand together. They\'re making up...*Squeals* Great chapter.
person Juri
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another one of your best. Never gets boring. And I\'m even thinking of writing a Hermione fanfic myself, although I\'ll stick with Ron and Hermione. That\'s a couple I can write. When I post, you MUST REVIEW! *Shakes fist* Seriously though, I\'m kind of disappointed in Snape. I thought he\'d do something for Hermione. Put a stop to Draco\'s behavior perhaps...but then I remembere\'se\'s a right bastard, so never mind. Lol.
person Marc
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oeaseease don\'t even think to involve another teacher in this affair (specially not Pr Snape), it is definitly, as ashamed as I am, between Draco, Hermione and maybe Harry (can\'t see future thru the fog of your mind); hopefully with Harry, but it is my guess.
Apart that, it is getting a little boring, please get some more story in this sex!
I think you should find a great way to make her get her reward and start another story.