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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please make a sequel. I so totally loves it. PLEASE!!! I NEED A SEQUEL!!! Later! :)
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think a sequel is needed bc malfoy is totally in love (ok, obsessed) with her... he just can\'t handle her being touched by anyone else.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"He hated everyone equally, some were just more equal than others.\" Such a classic line. Love the shout out to the master, Wes Craven, BTW. Excellent story, except the Dumbledore thing as I mentioned earlier. Just so you know, taking on the whole Slytherin Quidditch team would indeed have been up my alley, I\'ll have to think on that more.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I am EXTREMELY open minded, but that was even a little too squicky for me. Sorry, I tried to roll with it, just couldn\'t. Even if someone is very good at sex, sexual desire cannot be manufactured. If Hermione didn\'t feel desire to be with him, who cares if he got her off?
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'m still reading and still love this story. I\'m just a lazy, trifling person who hardly reviews. Just want you to know I\'m here.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more! more! more!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeeeeeeeeee!! I\'ve finished reading it!! wahoo!!
I\'m reviewing each chapter separately :)
Chapter 25 -
I\'m reviewing each chapter separately :)
Chapter 25 -
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could write for hours on your story, but I guess most of it has already been written by others, so I\'ll just write a few impressions:
1. I loved the story. I felt deeply moved by it, and just couldn\'t stop reading. One of the main reasons is that the characters are credible. I\'m actually glad I caught it when it was already finished.
2. I particularly liked the psychological analysis of Hermione\'s feelings, and the description of how she goes down, but then realises what she\'s doing to herself, and recovers her dignity back.
3. Regarding the controversial Dumbledore chapter, I was slightly shocked, but it plays a role in the story, and isn\'t entirely gratuitious, so I\'d leave it as it is.
4. I also loved Ginny\' role. Indeed, there\'s material for a separate story. Is it allowed to make fan-fics on fan-fics? (Only joking).
5. You also did something JKR hasn\'t for some reason; give Hermione the support of girlfriends, which I\'m sure girls need when they can\'t rely on their boyfriends. I liked that, specially in the last two chapters.
5. Since book 6 is just about to come out in a few months, it would probably be wise of you not continue this story, but maybe to remake it according to what happens after The Half Bood Prince.
1. I loved the story. I felt deeply moved by it, and just couldn\'t stop reading. One of the main reasons is that the characters are credible. I\'m actually glad I caught it when it was already finished.
2. I particularly liked the psychological analysis of Hermione\'s feelings, and the description of how she goes down, but then realises what she\'s doing to herself, and recovers her dignity back.
3. Regarding the controversial Dumbledore chapter, I was slightly shocked, but it plays a role in the story, and isn\'t entirely gratuitious, so I\'d leave it as it is.
4. I also loved Ginny\' role. Indeed, there\'s material for a separate story. Is it allowed to make fan-fics on fan-fics? (Only joking).
5. You also did something JKR hasn\'t for some reason; give Hermione the support of girlfriends, which I\'m sure girls need when they can\'t rely on their boyfriends. I liked that, specially in the last two chapters.
5. Since book 6 is just about to come out in a few months, it would probably be wise of you not continue this story, but maybe to remake it according to what happens after The Half Bood Prince.
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read both of your fics and have been enjoying them thoroughly. The one thing that irks me however is that \"The Subjugation...\" has so much more potential for continuation but it\'s listed as completed, whereas \"To Be
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Length wise , this story is an undertaking, but plot wise it is absolutely brilliant. From the first chapter you had my attention. I can\'t wait for the sequel.