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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you did so far with this story(as far as I got). one thing that didn\'t fit in to me was the whole Dumbledore scene. At first I thought it was a dream scene because it went so smoothly without any hitches like Hermione thinking what the heck she was doing and also because I couldn\'t see Hermione just spilling her inner soul to him, after all she was degrading herself in front of someone she wanted approval and appreciation out of. The natural person to talk to w hav have been Jinny I think. maybe Dumbre bre being a legilimens(mind-reader) could have gotten it out of her ( and if she is excited about losing control in the Imperius she should also like the Legilimens.
well thats all from me. keep up the good work, can\'t wait to see what\'s next.
well thats all from me. keep up the good work, can\'t wait to see what\'s next.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The only flaw in this chapter is that I wish it could have been longer. :D And I root for Harry!!
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I\'m getting all hopeful again (I hate that!). They\'ll talk more next chapter, right? Thanks for the update, sorry to read about your computer problems, that must have been a blow to the spirit (and the muse). Thanks again.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I have been following it for a while now but this is the first time I have reviewed. I have to say that even if you didn\'t intend on this being a d/hr story in the end, this is one of the best I have read thus far and I am a D/Hr shipper. Keep up the good work and I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far! I think it\'s time for hermione and harry to just get together. It\'s pretty obvious that they like each other!~
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am amazed by your creativity. This story is pretty good! I really like it. Too bad that Harry didn\'t agree to perform the curse for Hermione, I guess it would\'ve turned into a romantic relationship, unlike the one between Hermione and Draco. Snape really surprized me. I didn\'t expect him to talk openly to Hermione and tell her about a part of his past. I hope that you are going to continue this story, as it\'s getting more and more interesting.
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG... i loved this chapter!!!! You have to write another one like this later on in the story!!!
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Thank you Thank you!! I don
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story. The best Harry Potter FF I\'ve ever read. Please write more along the same lines! :-D
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok , first I\'m quite sorry for the boring\'s stuff , I was a little sick at the time.
(Personnally, I don\'t really like the way it goes but it is my problem}
This is good, in fact I needed to know why and where was going Hermione Granger.
I REALLY would like to see her safe in the end (maybe with HArry, but is my guess).
Wonder what will happen in the sequel? Surely depends from the sort of ending of this [good] story.
Any hints? ;-))
(Personnally, I don\'t really like the way it goes but it is my problem}
This is good, in fact I needed to know why and where was going Hermione Granger.
I REALLY would like to see her safe in the end (maybe with HArry, but is my guess).
Wonder what will happen in the sequel? Surely depends from the sort of ending of this [good] story.
Any hints? ;-))