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for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

by rubberduck

person Classic Cowboy
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice update!

drat, no smut next chapter either, but the one after that? hmmm now the question is will it be D/Hr or H/Hr? before hand I would say D/Hr no doubt, but lately I\'m beginning to wonder which way this is going to be leaning. I have to say normally I don\'t like D/Hr stories (do to my overwhelming hatred for a certain ferret) but this one\'s really captivated me. great story, great sex, so all around two thumbs up.

great job and update really soon!
person spaz141
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I so want Hermione to be with Harry. You keep dangling that in front of me. It sort of seems like she\'s started to figure herself out, or at least figuring out what she doesn\'t want. The almighty orgasim can be a powerful thing, but maybe, just maybe you are going to let her realise that there can be so much more. I almost got a sense from Draco that there might be some actual feelings forming there too? That\'s kind of scarey. Harry is still a mystery to me. Well, glad AFF is back and you had a chance to update. Thanks.
person Ashes
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Well, she\'s turned away from Draco, wants to marry Harry, and they\'re having a good ole adventure. ;) Perhaps it will end in lovely Harry & Hermione fluff! (Note : NO COMPLAINTS HERE) :D
person dragonlady sakura
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t think I have forgot you! Computer problems have me slacking off in the reviewing department. Anyway, enough of my sob story...what can I say about this chapter. Well, I\'m sure you\'re sick of all the praises (sike) but helluva chapter. The reconcillation scene was touching and I\'m happy for You\You\'ve been killing me for months with all the tension between the trio! And I loved it. Lol. Also the attack was nicely done and since I\'m following this and the \"Notts story\" I enjoy going back and forth following the intertwing plot twists. Brilliant as always.

Wow, awfully talkative aren\'t I? ^_~
person keys
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you are doing a great job with Draco. He is very in character. I really do love this story a long with the other one. It\'s very cool to read the same stary from different sides. And no, I don\'t think Draco would give up on Hermione that easy. Kepp up the good work.
person star
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what duck???!!! ahaha!!!! btw great chapter!!
person traydr vic
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Harry/Hermione (and the trio) stuff! I loved it
when Harry decked Draco. Made my day!! At the same time
I can almost agree with Hermione that she was really the one
who instigated the
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Disks might kill someone some day. I lost my stories the same way once. Thankfully I had them online:) But I had to rewrite the chapters that weren\'t uploaded. eh! That\'s technology! Ok, back to the main subject...lol
It\'s good to see that you\'ve updated the story:) Now, is Draco scared of Harry? I sensed that. I don\'t know if I\'m right or wrong. But he seemed scared that he didn\'t use his wand or his hands to give Harry a reply. Besides, wasn\'t he supposed to go to his part of detention after Hermione\'s?
And there\'s another thing that crossed my mind. When you wrote about Ron: \"His fingers clenched around his wand, deep in his pocket.\" Was that the time he took Harry\'s and Hermione\'s wands?
And one last question (being investigative huh? sorry!! but it\'s so interesting!!!) Draco didn\'t have the chance to use his wand, but the others didn\'t bother to use their\'s either. Why? Was it because Ron took them already? But they didn\'t notice that until he told them about that in the classroom. So...?
person Miki
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am just dying for her to tell Harry and Ron the truth about Draco.
I hate lies. (Can you tell what house I\'d be in?)
I\'m glad that she\'s at least talking to Harry. Hopefully, she\'ll clear the air.
BEFORE someone else does it for her. I shudder at how angry Harry will be.
He\'s so hormonal. Just like a real teenager. Now wonder Hermione did him.
All that pent up emotion has to translate well sexually.
Though I know that Harry is a better match, I love Draco too. Sexy Slytherin.
Will Harry prevail....Will Draco have her one last time....Will Ron ever choose a girlfriend?
Or will we all be surprised when Draco drags her off for a lifetime of consensual rape?
:) Can\'t wait. Hurry up and update.
person SloppyHermione
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve a feeling Harry and Ron are going to be in for a rude awakening. :) I hope you keep in mind my idea of Harry snapping when he finds out Hermione\'s been scng Mng Malfoy! Oh, and of course, when he does snap, Hermione suffers the consequences of it. Keep up the great work.