rate_review Reviews

I\'m so glad you updated! Great chapter! Having read the Death Eaters\' attack in TBOTBN, it was very interesting reading it from another POV. Poor Hermione, I wonder if Dumbledore regreted the sex \"lesson\" he gave her, seeing her reaction. And that bitch Lestrange, getting away once again. How I wish Rowling will kill her in the next books. So, Draco, I suppose, did nothing during the attack. Just remained safely in that room in the dungeons, eh? Given the way you finished the chapter, it makes me think that Hermione is beginning to have second thoughts about their \"relationship\" and wishing she could be with Harry. BTW, you said the scene between Snape and Lily is going to crop up again. In Harry\'s story, should I guess? Harry will be raging mad if he ever hears about that! He\'s going to kill Snape, lol! Can\'t wait to read the next chapters of this story and TBOTBN as well!

I just found your story and read all of it in one go. Very captivating, very well-written, with the properly balanced amounts of darkness, angst, sex, plot and humour. Most of the characters I found very much in character, especially Draco, Harry and Ron. As for Hermione... I\'m not sure if she\'d ever act like that, but then there would be no story, and that would really not do at all, since I so much loved the story! Dumbledore was quite out of character, though. I was not shocked at all by his behaviour, just surprised, but I suppose the kind old wizard would be rather shocked himself by what you made him do, lol! However, I have to say you wrote his part very nicely. I really can\'t believe how you managed to make the old man seem so sensual. I also found Snape a bit out of character too. I mean, I don\'t think he would trust Hermione so easily with such a personal secret. Or perhaps I was hoping to see some \"action\" between e twe two. Ah, yes, I was rather disappointed too, that Bill Weasley didn\'t sleep with Hermione. Am I so perverted that I\'d like to see her having sex with a couple of other guys too? As if Draco isn\'t enough, lol. Anyway, congratulations, it\'s a great story. I only wish I had discovered it when it was over, because now I can\'t wait to see what happens next, and patience is not one of my traits, lol. I hope you\'ll update soon!

I really enjoyed this story. It broke out of the SS/HG rut in a good way. SQUICK - Dumbledore. Anyway, are you intending to write more?

Hey, no fair! 2 TBONTBN\'s in a row ;o). Thanks for your notes on my review, although I am still not sure I am really getting it. Anyway, things are going my way for the moment. Lot\'s of hints about Hermione\'s romantic feelings for Harry mixed in with all the friendship stuff. I can\'t truly believe she would giv e up the friendship/love stuff for the exciting, forbidden sex with Draco. I think she can have exciting sex with Harry to, if not forbidden. Anyway, I am so happy she went with Harry instead of staying in the closet with Draco. More enforcement of my hopefull outcome. Still, you are full of twists and turns, so I don\'t take anything for granted, but so far I am loving the story again. As I keep saying, you are a master storyteller and you keep us enthralled even when we don\'t know what you will do next. I must tell you however that I am not a fan of TBONTB. The reason I read fan fictions is if they follow the trio, and Nott et al are such minor characters (at least so far) that I can\'t get interested in them. Sorry. So how about 2 Subjugations in a row? Fair is fair.

Now this was interetsing! Death Eaters strike!! Why do I get the feeling that Malfoy is going to ruin everything? And where was Ron? Why didn\'t he follow Harry and Hermione? Anyway, it\'s great to see Snape acts like a \'normal\' person for once. He got.. umm.. panicked? At least he told the students to hide! But where did he go? Meeting \'old friends\'?
Oh, forgot to say.. I really-really liked the position the trio woke up in. Nice one! Ron always making himself at home...lol!!

Yeah I know it\'s been a while since I reviewed, but I wanted to wait till you
got to a certain stage in the story. And I must say things have gone pretty
good so far. There was a little fumble in like the first four of five chapters
because they were still written like the previous version of the story. Some
things would be said and the chapter that was concerinig that item were
removed in the update. I have an idea that Harry\'s, Ron\'s, and Hermoine\'s
stories are really gonna be tied together. Especially if you actually kept the
removed chapters. Also, before I forget to mention I liked the chapter and
I completly forgot about Voldemort, but of course I would because it was
that chapter was in the original version. Anyway keep up the good work and
I can\'t wait for this story to wrap up so you can get started on Harry. And a
suggestion don\'t let the Draco thing be revealed until Harry\'s story wil will be
much more dramatic when you actually think about it

CDOG21

Of course consensual rape is an oxymoron - I was making a funny! Oh well, there goes my career as a comedic writer. You may not be aware of it, but your Draco seems to be longing for Hermione and hates it. It makes the reader (me) want him to change (at least a little) and find happiness. While I like Harry, I\'ve never found him particularly sexy. Draco, while scary at times, is oh so sexy! Hermione feels guilty for the pleasure she has while she with him, but keeps going back for more. This seems to make Draco more possessive of her. After all, what guy doesn\'t want to keep his source of exciting sex all to himself?

I don\'t feel that Harry was weak. When Hermione wanted him to perform an Unforgivable, he was adamant about not doing. It also takes a certain amount of fortitude to stay angry at someone. (A feat I\'m personally unable to accomplish.) So, I don\'t exactly see how Harry\'s been weak.

I like your latest chapter. Hermione stands by her friendship. Poor Draco, just realizing he\'s been a sex toy...oh well, c\'est la vie!

HUFFLEPUFF!!! (roaring in outrage - Leonine pride, you see) Just for that I\'m not reviewing again. Well, maybe after a chapter or two, when I\'ll probably be so happy to see an update you\'ll warrant instant forgiveness. :)

i really like this story! i hope you make it d/hr though, every draco/hermione/harry story i\'ve read seems to end up with harry/hermione.. and i like your draco, despite his nastiness :)

Wan ian interestig turn of events! Gets better and better every time. :) Question: Is Draco developing feelings for Hone?one? The reason I ask is because of him trying to keep her from going with Harry. Did he really want to protect her or did he just want to get laid again? Anywho, great story as always. Please continue! :)

Brilliant, finally the sort of story I researched.
Get any \'adventure\' you like as lo,g as they keep soome real objective, target in mind.
I mean, tiil now, none of Hermione nor HArry, nor even Draco had a meaning in their actions, it was purely instinct.
Now, there is a target.
I must admit I liked this fic, long before, bbut now I love
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I just hope they (specifically Hermione) won\'t change their mind like some mad weathercock (\'girouette\' in french).
I\'ll follow you, you\'re in my favorites for a long time already.