rate_review Reviews

Another great chapter. As usual you are right - I loved the
chapter, but hated to see that happen to Hermione. You
never disappoint - another twist! I should have seen it
coming since you set the stage earlier, but you throw so
much out there it gives you a lot of latitude. What\'s the
deal with Ron? bright blue eyes, darkening, turning green?
Is he disappointed because Hermione is worried about
Harry, or is he just concerned for Harry. Dumbledore,t
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old bastard, why can\'t he just stay away from Hermione?
Great dialogue and action! I am definitely not giving up on
Harry/Hermione. He has a girlfriend and she will probably
run back to Draco, but I still think Harry loves her, and
she him. Despite her history with Draco and the Snape/Lily
stuff (or perhaps because of it) I know they will reconcile
and true love will prevail!! Please?
Oh, and I apologize for what I said about TBOTBN. It was
uncalled for, I was just pissed because I thought you
posted 2 updates in a row. Sorry!!

oooh there ya go Hermione, had the chance with him but blew it off to go screw the ferret, smooth, I tell ya smooth!

but I really don\'t know why I like this story, as said, I usually can\'tn stn stumach the thought of Hermione/Draco, but I like this for some reason.

dispite my least favorite pairing, great stuff! get the feeling next chapter will involve Hermione getting some pain relief from jackass ... err Draco.

update fast!

Alright i\'ve been waiting what 2 weeks for the next chapter
and then you give me this! I\'m just playing i loved the whole
thing the fight scenes especially. Things were going so
smooth and i thought our heroes would finally get a second
chance. However, things are not what they seem. It would
appear that Harry has already moved on to our dear hufflepuff
Maia. And when i look back at it, when Hermoine abouabout
to say \"I Lo...\" i think Harry already knew what she was about
to say that was why he did what he did. It doesn\'t matter
anyway because i\'m just a viewer, its like yelling at the girl in
the movie to not go in there because the killer is in there.
Great chapter, but i hope we dont have to wait so long for the next one.


P.S. Have Harry do some real damage to one of the baddies in his story and dont forget to add the backstory between him and maia soon or in his story. Which ever you feel is better :)

Exelent chapter, the power Harry has is incredible, also the realization of Hermione that she have been used and that that make her loose Harry is great, I hope that you can still make this story a H/Hr(I am a H/Hr shiper), maybe if Hermione confess to Harry? Any way the Draco/Hermione couple is wrong, Draco is a bastard(good work making him so twisted) and Hermione need somebody that love her, not use her.

Any way hope you can write next chapter soon.

And if you put your stories in anyother place please first inform in your next chapter or something so we can continue to read your work

John

*Screams and flops down to the floor* You are the master..or mistress of torture! Now I feel doubly terrible for poor Hermione. She\'s right, especially about the Dumbledore part. And if anyone *CoughHarrycoughRon* found out what he had done with her...hell would break out. Lol. All I\'m saying is update soon for the love of all humanity! And my sanity. ^_^

P.S. Kickass chappie!!

this was a great chapter, but i want harry and hermione to get together!!!! More!!!!!

Perfect!!!! I\'m so glad that she\'s realized that sex can be horribly destructive when you are not honest with yourself and others. Oh well, she had to go through the motions to learn this. It\'s called life. I\'ve made a few misjudgements myself...but I never repeated them once I realized where I went wrong. At 16/17 it is often so difficult to determine what the correct path is. You know what they say about hind-sight. Hermione needs some much-earned solitude. Oh, oh! Is that Draco I see rearing his ugly head(s) (sorry Draco, you know I think you\'re adorable)?

I don\'t care if yost lst late...as long as it\'s terrific! Worth the wait. :)

Boooo!!

This SUCKS!!

Lol. No, the only thing that sucks about this is that there is no more chapters up for me to read right now.

:(.

So get cracking and UPDATE.

Angela

It\'s okay that Harry has a gf because Hermione belongs with Draco in my totally unbaised opinion lol. No, like I said before even if Hermione does end up with Harry (although I pray she doesn\'t) this has been on of the best Draco/Hermione fics I have read. And trust me I have read a lot. Great job on the chapter.

Wow, excellent chapter. Good pacing, character development, great turn with Hermione\'s self realizations and the appearence of competition. I am actually not sure where this story is going, and that is such a pleasent surprise. Really well-written, your characters stay in the character you give them consistently--no sudden unexplained changes. One of the best stories on this site. And hot too. Whooo *winks*