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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well it is a great reveletaion that at last Hermione wake up about what she is doing. I dont belive Malfoy is really falling for her, is more like a fixation, after all he is fucking Harry best friend, a girl that want really Harry ae hae have, Hermione wanted to experiment but things had gone to far for her taste, specially when she think of the future, Malfoy will be still be a bastard, and Hermione outside bed dont have anything in common with him.
Malfoy will try to take her again, when se resist and he comprend that is really over and she dont want anything form him, even with the Imperio, the we will she the Slytherin vengace, no so direct as to tell all people, something sublte and more destructive.
It will be interesant the conversation with the girls, some will be outraged, some maybe will comprehend, but she need to talk ALL to somebody so she can know how far she have fallen, sometimes when you are inside you dont notice, maybe the girls can tell abo about this new girl of Harry and give her pointers to help her recuperate him, After all when a girl have the back up of a group of gossip girls all is possible.
I dont think Harry really belive the explanation that Ginny give him, Ron is more guillible,but Harry have been lied before and have a mind more sharp, more adult.
In any case I will be waiting ynextnext chapter, and all the others stories you will write, and my vote is still a Harry/Hermione ending(just try to do it no so in the end!!!).
John
Malfoy will try to take her again, when se resist and he comprend that is really over and she dont want anything form him, even with the Imperio, the we will she the Slytherin vengace, no so direct as to tell all people, something sublte and more destructive.
It will be interesant the conversation with the girls, some will be outraged, some maybe will comprehend, but she need to talk ALL to somebody so she can know how far she have fallen, sometimes when you are inside you dont notice, maybe the girls can tell abo about this new girl of Harry and give her pointers to help her recuperate him, After all when a girl have the back up of a group of gossip girls all is possible.
I dont think Harry really belive the explanation that Ginny give him, Ron is more guillible,but Harry have been lied before and have a mind more sharp, more adult.
In any case I will be waiting ynextnext chapter, and all the others stories you will write, and my vote is still a Harry/Hermione ending(just try to do it no so in the end!!!).
John
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is she finally coming to some kind of "healing" I just don't know and is Draco starting to have real romantic feelings for her (despite the curse use)?
I wonder about this characterization probably more than I should. I suspect the next chapter will be informative. Thanks.
As for the e-mails - I'm happy to be on the list, I would like to request that you add a subject line. I tend to delete e-mails with no
subject lines. Thanks.
I wonder about this characterization probably more than I should. I suspect the next chapter will be informative. Thanks.
As for the e-mails - I'm happy to be on the list, I would like to request that you add a subject line. I tend to delete e-mails with no
subject lines. Thanks.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God that was so close just two or three more seconds and
we would have had a really good time. That was pretty nice
having Ginny come in at the last second to save Hermione.
And in regards to Draco and Hermione I finally figured out
why i liked the last chapter. He didn't use the curse it was
actually her and him going at it. This whole story he kept
using the Imperius curse and i couldn't figure out why i didn't
like it until chapter 20. Tis a shame she couldn't stay in the
same frame of mind, but oh my god it is gonna be so SWEET
when they do find out. To tell you the truth i honestly think
you're gonna write yourself in to a wall when you finally let
the cat out of the bag and i can't wait to see how you handle
that. As always enjoyed the chapter and i really do hope the
next one comes out SOON!!
we would have had a really good time. That was pretty nice
having Ginny come in at the last second to save Hermione.
And in regards to Draco and Hermione I finally figured out
why i liked the last chapter. He didn't use the curse it was
actually her and him going at it. This whole story he kept
using the Imperius curse and i couldn't figure out why i didn't
like it until chapter 20. Tis a shame she couldn't stay in the
same frame of mind, but oh my god it is gonna be so SWEET
when they do find out. To tell you the truth i honestly think
you're gonna write yourself in to a wall when you finally let
the cat out of the bag and i can't wait to see how you handle
that. As always enjoyed the chapter and i really do hope the
next one comes out SOON!!
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh. I remember the story now. Sorry for the confusion. Another well written chapter. I can't wait to see how Draco feels, and how the girls react.
Thanks for the update!
Thanks for the update!
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sequels you say? very interesting indeed. and I agree, Harry probably won't deal with Malfoy in canon, I'm betting that'll be Ron's job. they seem more of the archfoe types.
anyway, on to the review for this chapter ... where to start ... ah yes, very nice smutness in this chappy, and happy to see Hermione's finally figured out what she was doing. Draco has many options, and I don't think Hermione will get away from the ass ferret (no pun intended for this chapter) and sooner or later Harry and Ron will find out, how they take it toward Hermione will be worrysome, but Draco ... well all I can say about that is when they learn the truth "alas poor Malfoy, you won't be missed!"
Another factor is will Hermione go into withdrawels of her little fun games with the jerk we all love to hate?
also how will things play out with Harry's little girlfriend and such. Another thing I like about this is potential H/Hr I find more interesting then the H/Hr fics where they start out all over each other.
still hoping for Harry and Hermione to end up together, but weither they do or not, this looks to be a fun ride.
good stuff, man
anyway, on to the review for this chapter ... where to start ... ah yes, very nice smutness in this chappy, and happy to see Hermione's finally figured out what she was doing. Draco has many options, and I don't think Hermione will get away from the ass ferret (no pun intended for this chapter) and sooner or later Harry and Ron will find out, how they take it toward Hermione will be worrysome, but Draco ... well all I can say about that is when they learn the truth "alas poor Malfoy, you won't be missed!"
Another factor is will Hermione go into withdrawels of her little fun games with the jerk we all love to hate?
also how will things play out with Harry's little girlfriend and such. Another thing I like about this is potential H/Hr I find more interesting then the H/Hr fics where they start out all over each other.
still hoping for Harry and Hermione to end up together, but weither they do or not, this looks to be a fun ride.
good stuff, man
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for another chapter! Good work!
Hermione wants to be with Draco just to forget about Harry? Or she wants some kind of a revenge?
And walking through the corridors holding hands??!! Too bad Harry and Ron didn't see them! That would've been something!
It's great that the site isn't having any problems anymore (hopefully). Now I can check on your updates more often! yoohoo!! I'll make sto rto read your other stories too :)
Hermione wants to be with Draco just to forget about Harry? Or she wants some kind of a revenge?
And walking through the corridors holding hands??!! Too bad Harry and Ron didn't see them! That would've been something!
It's great that the site isn't having any problems anymore (hopefully). Now I can check on your updates more often! yoohoo!! I'll make sto rto read your other stories too :)
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist; if I
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Very VERY yum chapter! I love the tender yet still in character as a bastard Draco. Now I'm pulling for him more than Harry. Malfoy is definitely evil, yes, but so much more interesting that Potter. And he knows what a good thing he's got, while Potter doesn't seem to get it that Mione is awesome. Great story!
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
want to know what I really think about Ferrat boy? well other then the raw hatred ... I think he's a neccessary evil to the HP canon story. he's the Anti-Harry, which could be part of the attraction Hermione's been drawn into in your fic. Draco's the Sepheroth to Harry's Cloud. the Joker to Harry's Batman. the Kouga to Harry's Inuyasha. where Harry's heroic, brave and selfless, Draco's cowardly, backstabish, and selfish.
And I guess one of the reason I like your story is you stay true to all the characters (except that one scene with Dumbledore) you didn't make Draco into this missunderstood goodguy in wolf's clothing. He's a bastard, plain and simple, just he happens to have successfully seduced everyone's favorite bushy haired witch.
I will let you know, I don't trust Malfoy in canon, and I don't trust Malfoy in your story. He's a backstabbing snake at his core. And the closer Hermione gets to him, the more it'll hurt if and when he breaks her heart. and this fic especially showed she isn't making love with the guy, she's fucking Malfo get get over her broken heart of losing Harry. And that adds another question, how and why did Harry get him this girl? and is he REALLY happier with her?
While I'm still hoping for a conclusive H/Hr pairing to this, I have enjoyed the ride so far and what ever the final call is on the pairing, this has been a great read.
PS any chance of emailing me when you update this and the Nott story?
And I guess one of the reason I like your story is you stay true to all the characters (except that one scene with Dumbledore) you didn't make Draco into this missunderstood goodguy in wolf's clothing. He's a bastard, plain and simple, just he happens to have successfully seduced everyone's favorite bushy haired witch.
I will let you know, I don't trust Malfoy in canon, and I don't trust Malfoy in your story. He's a backstabbing snake at his core. And the closer Hermione gets to him, the more it'll hurt if and when he breaks her heart. and this fic especially showed she isn't making love with the guy, she's fucking Malfo get get over her broken heart of losing Harry. And that adds another question, how and why did Harry get him this girl? and is he REALLY happier with her?
While I'm still hoping for a conclusive H/Hr pairing to this, I have enjoyed the ride so far and what ever the final call is on the pairing, this has been a great read.
PS any chance of emailing me when you update this and the Nott story?
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is wrong on so many levels. First Draco rapes, debases,
Humiliates and defiles Hermione, and now he is seducing her?
Draco is a total bastard, it is unthinkable that he can be developing
Feelings for her. He performs unforgiveable curses for chrissakes!!
He IS the Dark! I can understand that she is confused about her
Feelings for him
Humiliates and defiles Hermione, and now he is seducing her?
Draco is a total bastard, it is unthinkable that he can be developing
Feelings for her. He performs unforgiveable curses for chrissakes!!
He IS the Dark! I can understand that she is confused about her
Feelings for him