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great chapter! I hope you update soon! :}

You're right :) When I was a teenager I used to have such moments when I needed to talk to someone, although I never did..
Anyway, this chapter was nice :) Although Draco's stares were bothering Hermione, and then came Luna's warning.. but it was good to see her talk happily (almost) with Ron and Harry. When Harry asked her

The only thing I don't like about this story is that it isn't longer! Keep posting please!

Your story has me hooked. I anxiously await your updates!

You know my ideaof HHr, but well, the way is difficult before reaching a right target.
Anyway you are the author.
I still hope you'll free Hermione of the "subjugation" and make her able to resist to the imperius, we all know it is possible , she just needed practice (I think she had enough).
I don't want her to stay a toy or weak .
I am severely adversary to any subjugation, any try should be punished.
I remember you talking of spell upon the head of Harry, so who casted it ? Maya?
Back to work lady, I want to hear more of a story I like.

Some help Harry and Ron are! I'm getting really pissed off at those two. No wonder Hermione has such a life. And now what's Draco planning? Rape, kidnapping, torture? Who knows?

Story still rocks hard though. ^_^

RD you make me laugh. I wish I could remember which author said it, Azazello I think but I'm not 100% - reviews represent a form of "payment" to the fanfic author, the more reviews one gets the more "valuable" the story. I understood that and decided that I would review every chapter/story I read and I have lived up to that promise. I'll give away a secret - If I don't like a story/chapter, all you'll get out of me by way of review is "thanks." Sort my way of "if you can't say something nice (or constructive) say...thanks"

As for chapter 23, you are wading pretty deep in to the angst now, the grossness was absent in this chapter and your portrayal of Draco did come off as scarey. Luna is very hard to write, I think you are doing admirablyr sor some reason I think male authors can capture how I perceive her to be better than female authors). If this fic gets anymore twisty it will turn into a pretzel. I like that, you keep me guessing. Still hoping for some good therapy for Hermione and happy romantic reunion with Harry. Waddya say? Never mind, I know you'll do your own thing.

Thanks for the update.

I really like the story, beside the sex(noting against that, is a good plot so it do look good) is a really deep story, full of introspective and selfdubts, I like that you can keep this story so well focused and with continuity to write(I have seen others autos that they began fine but they drop the story in the middle I really hope that will not happen to you).

I am a H/Hr shipper, and I think that your interpretation of Harry is right on clue, he som somebody to love him and a huffeplof is what he can need in the begining, not a ravenclaw,but Hermione is an other tormented soul, like Hary and I am sure he will notice the troubles of Hermione, after all he can be bright to time to time.

I hope you can write more sooner and put more antagonism with Hermione and Draco and Harry can come really fast and rescue(mentally and emotionally) Hene. ne.

AHHHHHHH! Stupid Hermione! Harry didn't want to go off with that girl (he better not have)! If only thta damn boy would decide if he wants her or not and TELLS It' It's her poor low self esteem that messes up things for her. That and the way all these asses (Draco, Dumbledore...) have fucked with her mind. Also being a teenager just plain sucks! Brilliant story.

*Shudders at what Draco could be up to* Be afraid, Hermione. Be very afraid. Adoring your story!