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That was the most horrible ending ever. I loved the scenes in the beginning all sexy and lustful. But damn this fanfic started going downhill rather fast

Second sexiest D/s story on the net. The dumbledore chapter was absolutely horrid but besides that I'm loving Chapter 13 in particular...Gargle it? LOL! I LOVE you for that : )

OK, I finished it...you rushed the end..this could have been longer...I'm torn..of course a woman wouldn't fall in love and be in a nice relationship with her rapist..but I'm a Hr/D shipper so I kinda wanted it to go that way anyways...nice story though. It's good to see a male writer who knows how to describe all of the confusing feelings that a submissive woman may feel when she subjects herself to humiliation, discipline, and gives away her power.

I just read your whole story, in one sitting. I thought it was written quite eloquently and normally I never review but I felt compelled by your writings intensity to do so.

Wow..... usually, now-a-days, I get bored with some stories, and don't finish them. I got all caught up on this one. Good job. *wink* But, seriously, I truely hope you're going to put up what happens next! I'm still cheering for Harry and Hermione! And, that prat Draco, should get what's coming to him. But, whatever you write, I'll probably like! Sweetness. I'll be making sure and watch out if you have the 'sequal' up. Till then,

not bad... not aomethoing I\'d usually read, but I saw that quite a few people who\'s stroire s I read had reviwed and recommended this one.... I\'m impressed...

Well one thing is certain dear writer, your story is very addicting and has had me earning to read more and more during the day, and to do nothing for hours and hours just reading. But i have had a great disapointment- I found yourself as a writer from the wonderfull story of \'The Lioneses son\' and have read most of your stories and as i found this one i thought it to be as good as the others. I have to say that thi one had me realy confused. I dont agree with the wayy you wrote of Albus and Hermione but i persued reading, hoping the story would start to be as good as all the rest. I daresay i was wrong. I cried when Hermione was sad about Harry and whatever the other girl\'s name is relationship, but was shocked with her attitude and the way she told Malfoy to \'Fuck her\'. It was a very unrealistic view of Hermione as a person and that was when i lost that initial erning to read. I did finish it, of course but with disapointment. I wished Hermione would tell Harry what she felt as he obviously does as well feel the same. i hope that your next story will not be this bad as your talent is obvious. You lost yourself, trying to make a fuck natural at that particular situation. Hermione in this stry is too damn perverted dear writer...

hey i just read this story its really good please please make a sequel pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!

you need to SERIOUSLY write a sequel... NOW! i love your draco - he\'s a hard ass sex god, whilst being the sappy boy who jus twants to be loved. please write a sequel.

I really loved this story! It is probably the best I have read in a while. The plot was really good. Lots of little surprises and twists. You have a talent for writing. I would love to see your writing branch out from H.P.F.F! I have just one teeny slightly negative comment to add. I was a bit dissapointed with the ending of this story. I so wanted to see a twist ending here. Ah well. It is your story and a wonderful story it is. Thanks for writing. Hope to see more from you soon!