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for Gap Year

by garath3

person Anon
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Aoebheann
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice start, interesting premise, but you should really get yourself a beta. Not to nitpick, but there are numerous spelling and grammatical errors and the structure could be tightened up a bit. But as I said, nice start, and a very unique crossover!