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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cute story so far... please continue! Can\'t wait to see what he has in his hand ;)
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great consciousness (thoughts and answers!). I love the voices. Chapter 2 was as good if not better than one. I cannot wait for chapter 3. What does he have in his hand.......I assume you would rather I did not answer the obvious from my place in the gutter? I will wait anxiously to see what you come up with.
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YLEEELEEEEEEEASE, MORE would be FABULOUS!!! I really want to see where this goes!!! Hoping for a chapter 3 SOON!!!
Deb >^..^<
Deb >^..^<
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So...? Where\'s Chapter 3????
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAH! You tease! I thought you\'d put this away and left it to languish in memory. Then you bring it back only to leave us (I can\'t resist this) hanging...
I\'m dying to know whether our Potions Masters inner voice has made an impression on him -- and I want to know what happens next. Hopefully there\'s a lemon grove in the offing!
Love the inner -- dialogue? monologue? I\'m never sure if one is arguing with one of the voices in your head; does that count for one or two conversants? :)
I\'m dying to know whether our Potions Masters inner voice has made an impression on him -- and I want to know what happens next. Hopefully there\'s a lemon grove in the offing!
Love the inner -- dialogue? monologue? I\'m never sure if one is arguing with one of the voices in your head; does that count for one or two conversants? :)
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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Falls over laughing hysterically* SOOOO MANY PLACES my mind just went!!! I\'m GLAD I read this! Heheheh BEAUTIFUL. ^_^
Aw, thank you for this story, but damn although it was fun piecing things together... reading the full version of what happened(to see if I botched in my guessing) would be nifty, but ah well!
THANKS!
Aw, thank you for this story, but damn although it was fun piecing things together... reading the full version of what happened(to see if I botched in my guessing) would be nifty, but ah well!
THANKS!
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love semi-annual brain cleaning, especially when it involves your imagination. love the internal dialogue you\'ve given her; i don\'t think that\'s what my psychology professors meant (centuries ago), but it works!
as usual, i\'m prostrate before you (\'i\'m not worthy!\') -- carry on. PLEASE!
as usual, i\'m prostrate before you (\'i\'m not worthy!\') -- carry on. PLEASE!
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this!!! I am hoping that you will be adding more!!! Deb >^..^<
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this! The whole snarky, stream of conciousness thingy is very appealing indeed. *shivers* What does he have in his hand? Am certainly interested in finding out next time.....
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, whatever could our professor snape have in his hand for our narrator? a whip? a letter (yeah, right), his -- er -- wand? i quiver with antic
pation!
i\'m also all a-quiver at the promise of garden ii although that\'s not the same quiver of impending sex i sensed from the end of \"time to think\". i will need that (time to think, that is) about garden ii, if it\'s anywhere as conflicted and dark as your first masterful garden piece.
so update \"time\" and let my buy more of the same. for now... please?
pation!
i\'m also all a-quiver at the promise of garden ii although that\'s not the same quiver of impending sex i sensed from the end of \"time to think\". i will need that (time to think, that is) about garden ii, if it\'s anywhere as conflicted and dark as your first masterful garden piece.
so update \"time\" and let my buy more of the same. for now... please?