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for Time to think

by missM

person Megan Consoer
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person FireBlade
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesome! I love it. I didn\'t I would like it as I usually dont like reading a story through thoughts but I love how you have it. You must continue, well your not being forced I would just love to read more is all. I love how you have both protrayed.
person totallylost
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the answer to your question depend how bae wee we . it could be a simple drink to his cock in all its glory. i do like your story make more please thanks
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still hoping for more so that we can find out just what it is that he has in his hand!!! Hoping for chapter 3 soon, Deb >^..^<
person MaddyRiddle
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
I like this conversation with his conscience... but now I really need to read what\'s going to happen there. BTW, my conscience doesn\'t allow me to think scenarios about the meaning of the last sentence of this chapter... but I differ... what can I do... I\'m not a good girl...

Please, keep writing... let the muse guide you...
person Isobel L
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes please to chapter 3.
person Laurie
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, we want a 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a nice chuckle. He could be holding anything. An ice cream cone, a book or the obvious.
Will you let us know in the next chapter please?
person Rilla
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Severus battling with his conscience. Of course you have to add three!!!
person Estrilda
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes - it is fitting that he get \"go ahead\" advice from the little voice in his head. Please more.