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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending, I\'m glad Severus and Harry finally got together.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Started of promising, but then became way too sappy for my taste, the characters are very ooc. Sorry, not my cup of tea.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this fic and can\'t believe I haven\'t met it sooner... It\'s so cute and whats best, ends happily:) And has lots of cute things in it...;)
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so competely delightful, I\'m competely overcome with happiness. That was such a sweet ending to such an amusing, humorous fanfiction! I hope to see other works soon.. your english\'s very good. :)
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! I got the author alert saying that the last chapter was up and I clicked the link and fanfiction.net wasn\'rkinrking! I was so worried that I couldn\'t read the last chapter and then I remembered that you have an adultfanfiction.net account too! Thank the gods! That was amazingly beautiful! The part where Harry said that he would let Severus go made me want to cry! But then they got back together! YAY!!! ^_^ I\'m so happy! You are an amazing writer! I can\'t wait to see more stories from you, especially in English (as my French still isn\'t good enough for me to fully understnad your writing in French). On the other hand, now I have a reason to work very hard to improve my French!!!
Harry and Sev forever!!! ^_^
~Miss Rhapsody
Harry and Sev forever!!! ^_^
~Miss Rhapsody
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite good. It did seem very rushed though. And getting married? Doesn\'t really fit in with the story line very well. Personally I think you could have spread that one chapter out through several more detailed chapters. But I must thank you for finishing it and not leaving us all hanging like some authors do. ^_^
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please continue it and write the last chapter soon. I love it. Looking forward to more.
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOved it!!!!
Severus was so great in is persute of Harry.
Please Update soon, this fic is underfull and so funny.
Severus was so great in is persute of Harry.
Please Update soon, this fic is underfull and so funny.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE!!!! PLEASE!! that was awsome! what will Harry do next?
i love this fic!! update it before i go insane!!!
i love this fic!! update it before i go insane!!!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 21 was grate. Severus needs to stop being so darn stubborn!