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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'d give it a 6 out of 10. was alright
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great story. Fun and original.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Lots of grammer and spelling mistakes, and sometimes it was very hard trying to understand what was being said and so forth, but man this was great.
Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you have an interesting premise here and I wanted to read more, but the typos and misspellings stopped me about halfway into the second chapter when it became incomprehensible to me. I understand that English is not your first language and there\'s certainly nothing wrong with that, however, you should get an English beta reader to go over this for you. Preferably someone with a firm grasp of grammar, punctuation and spelling and not someone who will tell you the story is great and wonderful no matter what is wrong with it. Those type of people can do a writer more harm than good.
I hope you do have this betaed and reposted at some later date; I\'d like to read the rest of this story and find out where you take the idea, how Harry deals with this and what more it does those around him.
I hope you do have this betaed and reposted at some later date; I\'d like to read the rest of this story and find out where you take the idea, how Harry deals with this and what more it does those around him.
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ummm.... Love it! Is there going to be more? *begs with puppy dog eyes*
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My f*cking god that was amazing!! I am exahuasted from reading that! That was so good I can\'t even put in words how good that was! Keep up the good work and long live Severus and Harry!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the most beautiful Severus/Harry stories I have ever read, and the most interesting plot line as well! It was amazingly written for someone who usually speaks French, with only a few errors throughout the entire story. I wanted ted to say that it was briliant, and you are a talanted writer with original ideas. Keep up the fantastic work, and I hope you write more in English later on.
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Best Harry/Sev ever. End of. I used to check on FF.net everyweek to see if you\'ve updated, but you never did, and I realized, \"hey, check here!\"
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! I\'m disappointed that I didn\'t get to review each and every chapter. I can\'t wait for an update on What Men Want. I\'m a big fan of your work. But anyway, I luv this story! It\'s quite cute. Keep up the good work!
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg finally u\'re finished! i\'ve been waiting for so long to know what happens. damn you should have write the part w/ 2 snapes and harry in detail.....they are so cute!!!
keep up teh good work. iwaitwaiting for more of your brilliant fics w/ lots of lemons :P```````
keep up teh good work. iwaitwaiting for more of your brilliant fics w/ lots of lemons :P```````