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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! Good job!! I like this version, but I will definitely go check out the one on fanfiction.net too! What\'s your username? And the story title? I LOVE IT!!!! Thanks! --Liz
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Damn, Damn.... Great chapter, I just hoped they would get back together. Of course I can see the reasoning behind it. Loved the Blaise involvement, and the killing of McNair was great! Anyways have a good Valentine\'s!
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this one better
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOw! What an awesome fucking chapter ! That threesome really turned me on! LOL Lucky bitch! She\'s got two sexy Slytherins slithering between her legs. *picks up tongue off the floor* Anyway, please update soon! ;)
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I 't 't believe they\'re not together! Update soon! I love it!
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18... HOLY MY!!! Those Dark Ones are damn puzzling!!! I am glad that they helped her where McNair was concerned!!! I do hope that when all is said & done Hermione will be able to regain her own being & be able (& want) to be wDracDraco!!! She did make it sound hopeful & promising to him, like she still wanted him, but was afraid he would get hurt!!!
I did like the situation of the 3 of them together, not only for the smut value though;-) I saw part of it as more of a payback for Draco hurting her as well as it being a way for her to be able to be close to him without having to be held accountable if she didn\'t want to be!!!
I do look forward to seeing what will happen when they go back to school & what will happen with Blaise!!! Til chapter 19, Deb >^..^<
I did like the situation of the 3 of them together, not only for the smut value though;-) I saw part of it as more of a payback for Draco hurting her as well as it being a way for her to be able to be close to him without having to be held accountable if she didn\'t want to be!!!
I do look forward to seeing what will happen when they go back to school & what will happen with Blaise!!! Til chapter 19, Deb >^..^<
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! It was fine! I liked it! So...what was that scar from anyway? And please hurry with the next chapter!!! I WANT MORE!!! Thanks, Liz
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17... I guess Draco\'s decision not to tell her about the bet came back to bite him on the butt!!! You really can\'t blame Hermione for being angry with him, but I wish that she wouldn\'t have left him!!!
This chapter was very sad for Hermione, but it was a bit sad for Draco too, she became so withdrawn & shut him out!!! I really do hope that they will work things out bse tse they really are good together & will need each other later on!!!
What happened to Hermione\'s waist? Will that be gotten into later?
Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^<
This chapter was very sad for Hermione, but it was a bit sad for Draco too, she became so withdrawn & shut him out!!! I really do hope that they will work things out bse tse they really are good together & will need each other later on!!!
What happened to Hermione\'s waist? Will that be gotten into later?
Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^<
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, long chappie, Okay, I have a list of points to comment on, First, the Bent Ministry official comment was funny. The cockyness Draco displayed was in true Malfoy form. Next, Hermione\'s family were Muggles, not Mudbloods, just a technicality. The scene where she had to see her family for herswas was well written and made me cry. Boo Hoo, I loved the fact that she stood her ground with Voldie. The truth spell was ingenious to use against Draco. All in all I loved your update. I understand it tood awhile and I was happy that the chapter was fairly long and had a lot of information to offer, which made the wait worth it. One other thing, just from writer to writer, k, how many rewrites did this take, and what is the average you do? I\'m rewriting my next chapter and I\'m stuck, so, I was just wondering if I\'m the only one who agonizes over rewrites like the project is my baby. I\'m sure you simpathize. Sorry so long. Thanks.
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... that chapter was awful!!! THEOKE OKE UP!?!?!?! Hell is freezing over this instant! *goes to the corner of her room a cries her eyes out*... update *sniff* soon *sniff*