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for Light and Dark of the Raven

by SlytherinSecret

person Noir Angel
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really love this story. Started reading at FF.net but moved here when you said you\'d put a diff line up. I was just wondering though, in Chap 19 i think it was, you said that you got Asriel from Phillip Pullman, are you sure it wasn;t Garth Nix. I;ve read most of Pullman;s books, and i know Nix uses that name in Sabriel, Lireal and Abhorsen.
Just wondering,
Moir Angel
person Jennifer
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really great
person synchro101
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
tsk tsk tsk, as a french speakers I must say I\'m dissapointed, if it is femme then the \"password\" would be \" la femme de la nit\" or what ever. still love it, getting a bit mushy.

-synchro101
person Heather
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is the first Draco/Hermione fan fiction that I read and also the first story I read on this site so it will always have a special place in my heart. This story has done everything I could have expected and more. Cliffhangers......they kill me...oh they really do (considering i\'m not a patient person)...soo I spend all of my other time on this site reading other D/H stories waiting and hoping for you to update this truly enchanting story. You are a very very very talented writer and like I said before, this is the best story ever....I need this one finished...or something seeing as it has truly gotten me addicted to the whole idea of Draco and Hermione and has caused me to start a fan fiction of my own. Continue writitng, but do hurry as fast as you can...I\'m hoplessly addicted LOL.

Heather Michelle
person Apollonia
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! What happ? Wh? Who got hit with the killing curse? Please say that it was Blaise that dies. If Draco or Hermione die that will totally kill the story for me! *sobs* Oh well, please update soon!
person CV
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is SO AWESOME! I\'m seriously going through withdrawls already, I can\'t wait until the next update! It takes a really skilled person to write a story based on another\'s characters, and I love the job you do!! ;) CV
person Puree
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i loved your story (so far)! its ingenious! hope u update as soon as u can... and u shudn\'t worry so much i bet everyone reads ur story for a rEASon!
person Ettey
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nicely done
person Pixie
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! another chapter! that made my day to read =]
person PaganPoetry
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well for someone who had writters block that turned out rather well. The knife is a good idea and theinniinnings of the explainations of the Innocents and Dark Ones works well so stop worrying about it. Love you xXx