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for Light and Dark of the Raven

by SlytherinSecret

person Heather Michelle
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another glorious chapter. Your plot thickens each and every time and it gets more and more interesting. I love the shower scene. I am also DYING to find out what the gods told Hermione (since it made her cry). Heck I almost cried myself in parts of this story. Keep it coming you truly masterful writer.

Heather Michelle
person Carly
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. Your doing a really good job and I\'m looking forward for another update.
person elementaldeity
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter, I half expected Snape to pose as Lucius, not Ron. That was a surprise. The wedding ceremony was short and sweet.

elementaldeity
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How many Pirates references can you get into one chapter? Tis good made me laugh and chorlte, maybe you should pick another good filme next time and try to get still more in without ruining the plot. It\'s a challenge for thee! Wonderful as usual
Love always
Jen
person Angel # 4
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant... Extraordinary... Wonderful... Stimulating... These are only a few of the words we could use to describe this peice. I absolutely love it. Please keep writing, this cliff hanger is killing me :)
person Heather Michelle
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very very good chapter. Although I was expecting Hermione to be in the fight somewhere I am glad she wasn\'t. I\'ve written quite a lot to my story, but I\'m not sure how much is allowed per chapter or even how long it SHOULD be. I am having so much fun writing it, especially during those boring classes that I am forced to endure through. It\'s fun to look like I\'m taking notes when I\'m actually writing the story. I will definitely tell you when it\'s up because I want to have at least half of the story written before I post it so that people can read and hopefully review so that I can ideaideas for what they would like... Again...very good story and I am always waiting anxiously!

Heather Michelle
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21... Draco 2, Death Eaters 0!!! I am glad that Draco chose not to put Hermione in danger!!! I know that killing his father had to be hard for him, but he did the right thing!!! Now all he has to do is tell Voldy that his father had wanted Hermione dead & he should be safe from his wrath!!!

I am glad that Hermione & Draco are together & Ron will just have to get beyond it!!! Til chapter 22, Deb >^..^<
person Apollonia
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Draco won! He killed both Lucius and Blaise and now he and Hermione can be together without any interference. Hehe. I\'ve followed this story from the beginning and it could make a really great movie. Can\'t wait for the grande finale. :)
person PaganPoetry
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mean, mean, mean, mean, mean place to leave it. Very very cruel indeed. I suppose I can\'t complain as I do it to you frequently but even so. Curse you! More soon or it shall be my turn to bombard you with pokings and bugging! :P
person JL
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger... Oy..
Great fic you have here, keep writing!