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for Light and Dark of the Raven

by SlytherinSecret

person s*j
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i laughed out loud when i read the part abt the address.. \"the bed\"
its definitely damn funny!!! hilarious! more updates pls! :)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11.......s iss iss is such an ass!!! I am glad to see how his influence over Draco has been stopped!!!

Gotta LOVE Albus!!! That note was too cute;-)

I do hope that things will work out for the Order so that they can work out for Hermione & Draco!!!

Til Chapter 12, Deb >^..^<
person Carr
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, just can\'t wait fo rmore. Great Job
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pansy is a SLIME!!! This really is going to be hard on Draco & Hermione, but, as they say if it\'s too easy it\'s not worth the bother!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<
person Zoe
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story! keep going!
person scholz03
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello! (=


Um...interesting story. I like it...besides all the fluffiness... (= ...which I actually like, but this story is actually pretty good. Just a couple of things, though.

First...and I have noticed that you haven\'t done this in a while...when someone in the story says, \"Something,\" why did you \'used\' to spell it, \"Summat\"...?

It just bothered me a little...there were a few other \'spellings of words\' that you used...I thought it made the characters sound like they were from Southern U.S. states or something.

I really do like this story. The plot is great! (= I just hope that you update sooner than later! (=
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What an evil way to leave us hanging;-) I really did like the confrontation between Harry & Draco!!! Can\'t wait to see what is going to happen!!! Deb >^..^<
person lily nicolee evans
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
like i said very very very very good story i love it so much please update soon
person massarokas
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I actually speccially liked your sex scene... oO LOL! but that\'s because i was afraid that you were gonna use the \'pussy\' word.. I dont like that, it makes it feel like .. porn to me. oO But you didnt! and becides that, you could feel the love and \'having fun\' in the.. act.. LOL

really good! ^^ hope you treat us well, and give us more... ^^

btw, about that \'pussy\' thing, that\'s one of the reasons why now i practically only read yaoi/slash... :u stu story was the first one i read for a looooong time... ^___^

ciao
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapters 7 & 8, FABULOUS!!! It appears that all the tension was worth it in the end!!! Now they will have to deal with Harry & eventually Ron!!! Sounds like Voldie & Severus were both happy about the 2 of them together, but Lucius.... well we know he\'s only happy when he\'s getting what he wants!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! Deb >^..^<