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AWW! I love this story SOOO much! I didn\'t enjoy the LM/Vold./Hr part... YUCK! Update soon though! I love the moments between Hermione and Draco!

Chapter 14...... Truth be told, I like your

Chapters 12-13...... This just keeps getting better & better!!! Sounds like Draco would LOVE to rip his father & Voldy to bits for what they did to Hermione!!! I am really curious to see how he reacts the next time he has to face his father!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<

Thank you for changing the warning. I appreciate it immensly. Keep writing, I really do like your story.

WOW! Both Lucius and Voldt get getting it on with Hermione. It turned me on with Lucius doing the nasty with her, but Voldemort had to go. I wouldn\'t have minded it if it were another handsome Death Eater or if Voldemort was in his Tom Riddle appearance. Poor Draco. He had to see that stuff. :( Anyway, awesome chapter. :)

Yikes!

Real Life spins me crazily out of control for the holidays and you have proceeded to write a novel! Sorry I haven\'t reviewed in a while but I have just had the extreme pleasure of getting to read 8 chapters in succession. Totally Fabulous.

I really like how you continue to explore Hermione\'s powers. Althought I do not like it - I thit iit is spot on that even if Voldie goes ga-ga for Sexy!Slytherin!Hermione, Lucius would not be impressed and see her as a threat.

I am also really enjoying Draco rmoirmoine\'s relationship. As they deal with their attraction for each other but also as they both have to figure out what a real, mature relationship entails. Neither has had one before. Learning to trust, communicate and comfort each other is their biggest challenge. I am such a romantic but I love seeing it.

Good Smut (wish there was more of it)!

The S& M wasn\'t that bad; I think it was more that to Lucius and Voldie it was kinky sex, but to Hermione (& Draco) it was an assault. I hope that you are able to write more about how this (can) strengthen/effect D & Hr\'s relationship.

As always I look forward to more.

Jules

I must first say the chapter was good and it of course was needed for plot. I would like to address your warning though about it being an SandM chapter. That in no way was SandM. SandM you need a Sadist (dominant) and a Masochist (submissive), both willing participants. That chapter was rape and should be labeled as such, not SandM. Otherwise it was a good chapter. If you do want to incorporate any SM role play, since that is all it is, consult a few references on the subject. Or another fanfic such as Flame and Moonlight by LadyMalfoy. I will still read and review of course, but please do us all in the SandM community a favor, we try to get past the sterotypes, and relabel this chapter as rape. I understand that she was \'willing\' for her role but even at that the submissive is the one whom acually has the control of those particular situations. Thank You.

I really dont mean to sound like a bitch, pledontdont get me wrong, just many people out there are very confused about BSDM as well as their own sexuality and they need to understand the whole world differences between rape and BSDM aka SM

OHHH! Update soon! I love it!

oooooi!!! sorry for note reviewing for such a long time... ^^; Great as always! keep up the good work!

ciao!