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for Light and Dark of the Raven

by SlytherinSecret

person elementaldeity
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I bet Ron was Peter Pan, right? I figured you wanted us to guess, anyway, good chapter, nice and long. When will the next dark revel be? It\'s been awhile. I\'d like to see alittle more of the darker Hermione. Oh well. Post soon Let us know how you did on your A levels.
person Draco_Fan
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was great. I love both their outfits... Pansy\'s was very suiting. Update soon... I love it!
person Liz Figs
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

A couple grammatical mistakes, but I do them too. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15.... There was a lot of emotion between Hermione & Draco & I really do hope that they will be able to stay together when all is said & done!!! This whole thing has been hard on them & they deserve to be together & happy!!! I am glad that Ginny knows, it\'s one less person for them to have to worry about!!! Til chpater 16, Deb >^..^<
person katie
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your a great writer
person PaganPoetry
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And so I finally get round to reviewing this. *hangs head* probably should have done so ages ago but kept forgetting to or not being online. Anyhoo, as you already know tis great and the idea for the originals is good so you\'d better get thinking up where it\'s going! :P
person Amy E.
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I just wanted to say how awesome this fic is!! I\'ve been following it since you started, its really amazing! It\'s so trattrating that they cant openly declare their love for eachother! You write it so well, i feel like im a student at hogwarts or something! Please please update, I cant wait for the next chapters!!! Thanks for writing such a great fic!
- Amy
person carr
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, as of tmomemomet ist is by far my favorite. As for not knowing where your going with it, thats half the fun. It will keep the suspense up and suprise you as much as all of your faithful readers!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! I\'ve been checking in everyday as I absolutely love this fic. It\'s so dark, I would die in Hermione\'s position. Hope you update more soon!
person elementaldeity
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Short and sweet and to the point. \"A few hours later\"? wow, now that is talent, to bad you couldnt embelish more. The thought of the Ancients and all, thats how we are supposed to write, let it flow from your mind, not cage it to make it something you originaly intended, that would get boring, wouldn\'t it? Keep writing ill keep posting