rate_review Reviews

That is a great story so far, it\'s not over yet right? But if it is it\'s really good, I hope though that you write a new chapter soon. It\'s wonderfully writen. I was wondering about the dark mark and how it has not faded yet, and about the whole thing about Hermione not being able to have children and then Draco talking to the Gods and they told him that she would figure it out... I just hope that means that your going to write more chapters. ^__^

My computer broke down before I could read the final chapters. BUMMER!!!! I just bought a new one and when I read the last few chapters especially the one that had the part about Ginny\'s funeral it practically made me CRY!!! :( Why did you have to kill her? Love your story but so sad.

Well i cba reading your book its to long get a life but it probably is crap

rar

Hi!

I've been following this story of yours and I really have enjoyed it... but I wanted to warn you that this most recent chapter has what appears to be an error caused inadvertently by a spell-check or a replace command. In the first half of the chapter, it appears that all the places where you wrote "Hermione" were repaced with "Draco" which makes it a tad confusing to read. I figured it out quickly, and could see what happened, having done similar things myself by accident (all you need to do is to be trying to correct one erroneous word, and then hit "replace all" instead of just replacing the one instance...) In any case, I look forward to seeing more of your writing!

Glo.

May want to go through and edit this when you get the chance. Theere ere rampant errors regarding calling Hermione Draco and changing their respective genders. Also, several misspelled or wrong words entirely.

Regardless of the errors, it was nice to see an update. Hope things improve.

the story is good. it keeps to the main points of what happened in the actual book which is a bonus, but there are tiny things that are incorrect. hagrid says the word \"summat\" because of the area he comes from. it is part of his accent. draco and hermione (and most fo the other characters) would not say \"summat\" or substitue \"me\" for \"my\" (ex me foot or my foot) because draco for one is from a rich family and would have been taught to speak with eloquence and intellegience and same goes for hermione. shes smart you know. and you cannot apparate or dissaparate from the hogwarts castle or grounds. i have read the whole story that you have written here but decided to comment on this chapter because it was the firs com come up when i ked ked on the link i have saved. I really do love what you have written here its amazing. keep up the brilliant work!

~Elle~

wow still amazing wish to read more
cya ash

Hi. Just a note to say I won\'t be able to update for two weeks. All I can do is apologise for this. I am going on holiday on Saturday and was hoping to update tonight but due to organising the holiday, some last minute problems with that AND a major crisis that my best friend had I haven

PLEASE KEEP WRITTING!!!! It\'s a wonderful fic but its been a while since you updated. Please update