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for 10 Years After

by Padraigin

person spaz141
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think I like hard edged Hermione. I think she\'s also being a bit too optimistic to expect Harry to bounce back so easily as practical as the divorce was it wasn\'t something he was expecting even though he readily agreed to it. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter, thanks for writing.
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I especially loved how she hexed Ron! That was funny.

Update again soon.
person SandraM
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That damned redhead should have had more than his \'willy\' turned green. Should have turned him into a toad.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 was yet another tear jerker!!! I love this line:
person spaz141
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Short lived angst is great, thanks. Ron is such a prat. I\'m so jealous my bathtub is way toall.all. Thanks for writing.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank You so much for updating so quickly!!! I really like how she thinks of him as \"her man\". I also think that the conversation between Hermione & Albus was important, gave her a bit of extra insight. I always knew that Severus was a good man, now he has shown thathas has a very good heart as well*
person wiccanwillow
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant story. Brought tears to my eyes, the love. Wow. Read, enjoy.
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a sweet chapter. I love how you have written Severus in this story. He still has that hardness about him but he also has a gentle and vernaible side to him as well. Keep up the great writing.
person elementaldeity
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The dynamic of Harry and Hermione is really tangible. I can feel what they feel and that is the mark of a good writer in my opinion. Snape making her dreams come true was a unexpected twist but appreciated. I\'m glad to see Harry has accepted her decision. Just find him someone too by the end of your story, he\'s so pitiful, please. Thanks.
person Estrilda
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!